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You have a collect call...will you accept?
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Comment from
Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a well-stated entry to the 12-word contest. The text is a great size. The message is focused and clearly stated. I feel a more colorful background, maybe the shade of the shell would add to your presentation. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
Comment from
Ricky1024
As always loved to listen that way to the sound of the Sea.
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
Comment from
Julie Lau
This a cute concept and I really like it. The succinct requirements of the poem's form suit it well - not trying to say too much, just to get your idea over; an original little twist on the properties of a conch shell. Lovely photo also. Julie Lau
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
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