Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a beautifully stated entry to the 12-word contest. The text is a good size. However, better spacing is needed between the lines because they run into each other. The message is focused and clearly stated. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

I will check spacing, thanks.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 11-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Our skies are like works of art sometimes and have been painted by famous painters and I love an orange sky but never see one in the morning as I am not up early enough! So I will take your words for it here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Nice you can sleep. I have a problem always up early. Thanks for the read and feedback. XX

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and good presentation.
-You have used your 12 words well with a good topic.
-Effective nature and color imagery.
-I like theme of art and personification.
-You create a peaceful mood showing the
beauty of the morning sun
"with red and gold hues."
-A very good entry; good luck.
-One small thing: 'paints' should be 'paint'.
the subject is strokes.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Thanks for review and the catch. I will edit. Appreciated.

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Mar-2023

You are welcome. Did you change your background color or font? The font color is very faint. It wasn't that way before.

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Thanks I will check.

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Mar-2023

It looks good now.

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks for the follow-up. Appreciated.

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Mar-2023

You are welcome.