the Vine
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
What a lovely poem you're frightened very nice and I like the analogy of the grapevine too you're not a great picture to match! These kinds of poems are sometimes difficult to navigate . You have done well in your word choice. You're layout and you understanding what you're saying is perfectly clear without having to navigate.
I appreciate what you frightened and I enjoyed it very much. I don't find any issues with spelling or sentence structure. Punctuation. None of that falls seems very well.
I wish you all the best and good luck thank you for your submission!
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What a lovely poem you're frightened very nice and I like the analogy of the grapevine too you're not a great picture to match! These kinds of poems are sometimes difficult to navigate . You have done well in your word choice. You're layout and you understanding what you're saying is perfectly clear without having to navigate.
I appreciate what you frightened and I enjoyed it very much. I don't find any issues with spelling or sentence structure. Punctuation. None of that falls seems very well.
I wish you all the best and good luck thank you for your submission!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
Comment from Kaiku
always a good message. I will admit that when I saw this coming from you, I was thinking as I scrolled down to see your verse that maybe there would be something along the lines of, The Grapes of Wrath. Maybe another time.
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always a good message. I will admit that when I saw this coming from you, I was thinking as I scrolled down to see your verse that maybe there would be something along the lines of, The Grapes of Wrath. Maybe another time.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023