Life
Be the best you can be10 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
You are correct in saying "Hate is a very harsh word." It is an awful word used far too often. The more we say it the more it tends to roll off our tongues.
A very well composed poem. The necessary words were well integrated and did not feel forced.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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You are correct in saying "Hate is a very harsh word." It is an awful word used far too often. The more we say it the more it tends to roll off our tongues.
A very well composed poem. The necessary words were well integrated and did not feel forced.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
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😊🇦🇺
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your written poem is so true. Life is a blessing if we come to know who Jesus is...He solves many issues in life; without Him we would not have nothing but with Him we have everything.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Your written poem is so true. Life is a blessing if we come to know who Jesus is...He solves many issues in life; without Him we would not have nothing but with Him we have everything.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from patcelaw
Author, this is a very well written form with the required words in it. You have presented it very beautifully, and it reads very smoothly when red by the computer. You have the punctuation marks exactly where they belong, and that makes the reading of it on the computer much more flowing. Keep riding and using the proper punctuation marks because it sure helps a person who has vision problems. Patricia.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Author, this is a very well written form with the required words in it. You have presented it very beautifully, and it reads very smoothly when red by the computer. You have the punctuation marks exactly where they belong, and that makes the reading of it on the computer much more flowing. Keep riding and using the proper punctuation marks because it sure helps a person who has vision problems. Patricia.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much Patricia
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, this is very beautifully presented in this form and a wonderful message within. All the criteria has been met too. I see a winner here! Rooting for ya!
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Wow, this is very beautifully presented in this form and a wonderful message within. All the criteria has been met too. I see a winner here! Rooting for ya!
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Before we love anyone we must first of all choose the right people to be in our life and when we make good choices I think it is easy to love those around us. Being blessed with a wonderful family, I am rarely touched by hate, I loved your uplifting words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Before we love anyone we must first of all choose the right people to be in our life and when we make good choices I think it is easy to love those around us. Being blessed with a wonderful family, I am rarely touched by hate, I loved your uplifting words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much Dolly
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a valid affirmation of what is, or should be, important in life to have a good life. You made good use of your imposed words, and I particularly liked the spin you gave with the choice of the meaning of the word 'filthy' - unusual. kay
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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This is a valid affirmation of what is, or should be, important in life to have a good life. You made good use of your imposed words, and I particularly liked the spin you gave with the choice of the meaning of the word 'filthy' - unusual. kay
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from royowen
Love, that's the greatest commodity and resource there's simply mot enough of, and it's a decision rather than a feelin.that the world the world needs to learn. Yes, having enough money with a little left over is happiness, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Suggestion : Some of the keys words in your poem ate very indistinct, they need darker fonts.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Love, that's the greatest commodity and resource there's simply mot enough of, and it's a decision rather than a feelin.that the world the world needs to learn. Yes, having enough money with a little left over is happiness, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Suggestion : Some of the keys words in your poem ate very indistinct, they need darker fonts.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you
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OK
Comment from mermaids
You did well using these words. You have a smooth poetic flow and a light feel to your words. I like how your poem encourages the reader to love others and love your life. Best wishes for this unique contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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You did well using these words. You have a smooth poetic flow and a light feel to your words. I like how your poem encourages the reader to love others and love your life. Best wishes for this unique contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Kaiku
I reviewed as five stars because of the word usage that was the prompt. Since you used periods at the end of lines, I am wondering if the use of commas in a couple of places would be warranted, Hate is a very harsh word, we need....
Spacing of some words could be improved, Food,water rather than Food, water
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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I reviewed as five stars because of the word usage that was the prompt. Since you used periods at the end of lines, I am wondering if the use of commas in a couple of places would be warranted, Hate is a very harsh word, we need....
Spacing of some words could be improved, Food,water rather than Food, water
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thanks Not sure I understand what you mean though word usage that was the prompt
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didn`t you have to use certain words in the writing prompt?
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I did love hate clean and filthy.
Comment from poetwatch
You surpass the challenge, author, with your poem on life. If people, in general, would follow life with love in their hearts they would be richer than anyone. Why? Because with love they can join together in peace. This is a good entry for the Poem With These Words Contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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You surpass the challenge, author, with your poem on life. If people, in general, would follow life with love in their hearts they would be richer than anyone. Why? Because with love they can join together in peace. This is a good entry for the Poem With These Words Contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much