"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Mia Twysted
Loving and inspiring pieces. There is more out there than we can see, and we lose the ones we love, but that doesn't mean they are gone. We will see them again someday.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Loving and inspiring pieces. There is more out there than we can see, and we lose the ones we love, but that doesn't mean they are gone. We will see them again someday.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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When I first started writing about 19 years ago.
The second book after
"The Gift of Life" was
"My Deeper Understanding of the Word Love".
The following was
"My Deeper Understanding of the Word Love XXXX
I seem to have gotten off the love writing track with Grieving Poetry and a lot of Fairytales.
But once in a while I love to throw some Love in!
Doctor Ricky"
Comment from country ranch writer
Yes time heals one broken hearts take a long time but we must push forward not dwelling what you tried to do to yourself in the past and keep doing your best to save others to pass on life so they can live another day.May God Bless And Keep you safe.
Sunday Feb5-2023.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Yes time heals one broken hearts take a long time but we must push forward not dwelling what you tried to do to yourself in the past and keep doing your best to save others to pass on life so they can live another day.May God Bless And Keep you safe.
Sunday Feb5-2023.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thanks country ranch writer.
Much appreciated.
Doctor Ricky.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this emotional post with us. I can't I enjoyed reading because of the subject matter, but it is a good write.
Yes to finally again See?
Yes see your childish grin.
Yes that I so much want to again, bathe in.
Yes to hear your voice after almost twenty, long, years, of "Endless Tears"
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Yes to feel your gentle touch that God, I miss so Very, Very, much.
Yes again to watch you Breathe.
Yes on your own again.
God, I surely can Believe?
Yes in Heaven Above. (You need a comma after all these 'yes'.)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you for sharing this emotional post with us. I can't I enjoyed reading because of the subject matter, but it is a good write.
Yes to finally again See?
Yes see your childish grin.
Yes that I so much want to again, bathe in.
Yes to hear your voice after almost twenty, long, years, of "Endless Tears"
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Yes to feel your gentle touch that God, I miss so Very, Very, much.
Yes again to watch you Breathe.
Yes on your own again.
God, I surely can Believe?
Yes in Heaven Above. (You need a comma after all these 'yes'.)
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thanks Barbara sometimes I spit out a nice one.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I feel your deep love in your words Ricky and your grief and your longing to be united with your son. We learn to live with grief, but it never completely goes away, a sensitive write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I feel your deep love in your words Ricky and your grief and your longing to be united with your son. We learn to live with grief, but it never completely goes away, a sensitive write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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The love burns bright not like a candle in the night.
The love burns so bright. Even raging forest fire could not put out this light!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This poem or story (it seems to have elements of both) is so sad. It is obviously about your son, but makes me feel that he is far away and that you are feeling his loss acutely. My heart goes out to you in your pain. kay
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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This poem or story (it seems to have elements of both) is so sad. It is obviously about your son, but makes me feel that he is far away and that you are feeling his loss acutely. My heart goes out to you in your pain. kay
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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The love burns bright.
Brighter than a million candles in the night.
The Love burns deep inside.
Keeper than the core of this earth.
As it shall continue to do so from my final demise to the very beginning and conception of my birth.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
O yes, love unbound, now, you feel about them, they are above, there, no one to cares any more, but you both care with a promise, ever, caring, you never get down, you are there to fix; well said; ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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O yes, love unbound, now, you feel about them, they are above, there, no one to cares any more, but you both care with a promise, ever, caring, you never get down, you are there to fix; well said; ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Very nice review on this one ALCREATOR.
And thanks,
Doctor Ricky
