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Comment from Kaiku
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This was very good. Is this a statistic that for every 12 breaths we take a child dies from various reasons like, starvation, sickness, abuse etc.?

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    I don?t know how to embed articles .find below.

    Most well off people don?t stop even to think about it.

    The contest is finished .. the poem did get one vote ..

    i expected 0 votes because indifference is what reigns in most people s heart.

    I?m going to add a pic later which I had already found ..

    for the contest
    the statistics should have been be frightening enough .

    https://gdc.unicef.org/resource/nearly-half-all-child-deaths-africa-stem-hunger-study-shows
reply by Kaiku on 03-Feb-2023
    Saw a movie this afternoon. Palace Fortune with Jason Statham. Entertaining. Hugh Grant played a villain. Charming as ever.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    I have not seen any films with Jason Statham ,

    I don?t care for blockbusters full of action.I prefer intense dialogue in a film like in The English Patient. Ralph Fiennes is a brilliant actor. Seen lots of his films.

    I have seen one film with Hugh Grant 4 weddings and a Funeral.

    Where did you watch
    Jason Statham on pc /you tube?
reply by Kaiku on 03-Feb-2023
    Movie theatre
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    It was in English with Portuguese captions?
reply by Kaiku on 03-Feb-2023
    Yes
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Are you thinking to enter the 25 word competition?
reply by Kaiku on 03-Feb-2023
    Will be my last one for awhile. I had a 2-4-6 already done but I couldn?t enter so I refigured it for the 25 prompt. Not much depth to it but cute.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    I?ll check it out
Comment from Karyn2
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Oh this is so sad!! Your black and white background really brings power to these stark words. The rhyme and strong message that speaks to the fragility but seemingly grave unfairness of life, is so provoking. What an incredible choice for such few words. I hope this does well in the contest and I hope people wake up and see the devastation that others face.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
    Yes the situation is dire..billions are wasted on warfare like in Ukraine because America has big financial and strategic interests there.

    I didn' t provide a pic because I wanted the words to tell the tragic truth ..I'll add the pic i found after the competition.

    thank you for reviewing!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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How very tragic this is and although aid is sent to these poor people, this situation continues and this is because of the way these countries are run. The foundations need to change before these people can build a life, it seems like a hopeless situation and it has been like this for as long as I can remember, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023