Paranoia
Effects of mental illness12 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
I relate to this poem, unfortunately. Nothing worse than living with a loved one that over the years you've become disconnected. Your short piece expresses this well. Have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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I relate to this poem, unfortunately. Nothing worse than living with a loved one that over the years you've become disconnected. Your short piece expresses this well. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review
Comment from Wendy G
This has impact! Very stark words, no image to distract or soften the harsh reality. The grief of lost love and the ensuing silence is both devastating and painful, akin to emotional death. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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This has impact! Very stark words, no image to distract or soften the harsh reality. The grief of lost love and the ensuing silence is both devastating and painful, akin to emotional death. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Paranoia may be caused by isolation, previous traumatic experiences, anxiety, alcoholism and teen drug abuse. You fear to do anything that is out of the comfort zone. You need support to overcome this kind of disease.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Paranoia may be caused by isolation, previous traumatic experiences, anxiety, alcoholism and teen drug abuse. You fear to do anything that is out of the comfort zone. You need support to overcome this kind of disease.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I suggest that you could add some kind of artwork to it. That would make it shine even better, and stand out. Just food for thought. You did a great job with this. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I suggest that you could add some kind of artwork to it. That would make it shine even better, and stand out. Just food for thought. You did a great job with this. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written seven word poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is a very well written seven word poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review
Comment from Sugarray77
Well done on a finely crafted poem for the Seven Words or Less prompt. Your verse is meaningful and captures the imagination of your reader. Great job and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Well done on a finely crafted poem for the Seven Words or Less prompt. Your verse is meaningful and captures the imagination of your reader. Great job and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are intense! I found the words alarming, descriptive
and creative. I pondered on these words - thank you for the words of
above the title. This words are sad and painful. The poem flows and
connects well.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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The author's words are intense! I found the words alarming, descriptive
and creative. I pondered on these words - thank you for the words of
above the title. This words are sad and painful. The poem flows and
connects well.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from royowen
I think the silent treatment is a little unfair, it's terrible punishment, and shouldn't be applied, my sympathy lies with the recipient, beautifully written post my friend, great post, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I think the silent treatment is a little unfair, it's terrible punishment, and shouldn't be applied, my sympathy lies with the recipient, beautifully written post my friend, great post, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review
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Most welcome
Comment from jessizero
I have been there, and you described it well in just seven words. It is painful, to say the least, but you made it beautiful in a way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I have been there, and you described it well in just seven words. It is painful, to say the least, but you made it beautiful in a way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Wow, this is a strong line. It would also work for prose. Of course the reader knows silence is not enough to kill a person, but what a great way to use hyperbole and describe the issue behind two characters at the same time. I guess it would also be implied personification as if silence were a person as well.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Wow, this is a strong line. It would also work for prose. Of course the reader knows silence is not enough to kill a person, but what a great way to use hyperbole and describe the issue behind two characters at the same time. I guess it would also be implied personification as if silence were a person as well.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review