The Lighthouse
A shining light for all that sail the seas.27 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
I was always fascinated by a lighthouse, though I never did any research on them.
I liked the description - The guardian light with flashing eyes...
The mariners guide. Nicely composed.
John
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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I was always fascinated by a lighthouse, though I never did any research on them.
I liked the description - The guardian light with flashing eyes...
The mariners guide. Nicely composed.
John
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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John,
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. Glad you enjoyed it. The Fan Art selection of art was spot on.They have a great selection of images.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Jayy...
This is a nicely written poem. I really enjoyed it. The only thing I would try to say is to make it longer. You skillfully selected powerful words, creating a rhyme and suspenseful story. I really like the "time against tide line." Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is a nicely written poem. I really enjoyed it. The only thing I would try to say is to make it longer. You skillfully selected powerful words, creating a rhyme and suspenseful story. I really like the "time against tide line." Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Jay,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. . My father was a light keeper for 15 years. He Told me stories of rough water around the lighthouse. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This is a nicely written poem. . My father was a light keeper for 15 years. He Told me stories of rough water around the lighthouse. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Joanne,
Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.Glad you enjoyed it. Your father had a pretty unique job. Keep well and have a great day.
Barry Penfold.
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was a nice little poem. I liked the rhyme scheme and the bouncy cadence. The picture is a good pick. Really goes along with the piece. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This was a nice little poem. I liked the rhyme scheme and the bouncy cadence. The picture is a good pick. Really goes along with the piece. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thanks for taking the time to review my poem. Glad you enjoyed it . Yes Fan Art supplied the artwork. It was spot on.
Have a great day
Barry Penfold
Comment from Thesis
This is a good piece that highlights the need to for more of these protectors. You've identified that because of the perils a boat captain can face, there is solace in the fact that the light provides a sense of reassurance during difficult times of hazardous navigation.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This is a good piece that highlights the need to for more of these protectors. You've identified that because of the perils a boat captain can face, there is solace in the fact that the light provides a sense of reassurance during difficult times of hazardous navigation.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.The art work was spot on as well.
Take care and have a good day.
REgards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from ArwenE
This is a poem that describes the power and danger of nature, specifically the sea and the sky. The "raging seas" and "thunderous skies" create an image of a wild and tumultuous environment. The "guardian light" is personified as having "flashing eyes," giving it a sense of watchfulness and protection. The phrase "man against nature, time against tide" suggests that there is a struggle between human and natural forces, with nature being unpredictable and unstoppable. The "grey lonely light" is described as the "mariner's guide," highlighting the importance of light as a beacon for those navigating the sea. The poem is written in a simple, direct style with a clear rhyme scheme, which gives the poem a sense of stability and order, despite the chaotic imagery. The use of personification and metaphor in the poem gives it a powerful imagery and allows the reader to connect with the emotions and experiences of the writer.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is a poem that describes the power and danger of nature, specifically the sea and the sky. The "raging seas" and "thunderous skies" create an image of a wild and tumultuous environment. The "guardian light" is personified as having "flashing eyes," giving it a sense of watchfulness and protection. The phrase "man against nature, time against tide" suggests that there is a struggle between human and natural forces, with nature being unpredictable and unstoppable. The "grey lonely light" is described as the "mariner's guide," highlighting the importance of light as a beacon for those navigating the sea. The poem is written in a simple, direct style with a clear rhyme scheme, which gives the poem a sense of stability and order, despite the chaotic imagery. The use of personification and metaphor in the poem gives it a powerful imagery and allows the reader to connect with the emotions and experiences of the writer.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem.Glad you enjoyed it . I have always been fascinated with lighthouses.
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork, Barry.
-Thanks for the note about the lighthouse;
it must be amazing to see.
-You wrote a good poem about it
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You create a good word picture
of the seas and "thunderous skies."
-I like the personification in the next line.
-Very good closing lines, as well.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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-Very nice artwork, Barry.
-Thanks for the note about the lighthouse;
it must be amazing to see.
-You wrote a good poem about it
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You create a good word picture
of the seas and "thunderous skies."
-I like the personification in the next line.
-Very good closing lines, as well.
-Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Glad you enjoyed it .
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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You are very welcome, Barry.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your beautifully descriptive verse reminds us that lighthouses are not just a decorative part of coastal landscapes. I love that you expose this purpose and importance. Nice job.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Your beautifully descriptive verse reminds us that lighthouses are not just a decorative part of coastal landscapes. I love that you expose this purpose and importance. Nice job.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Ginda,
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. So glad you liked it . Lighthouses are so important and do possess a certain mystique.
Take care.
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Karyn2
Barry this poem is wonderful! The end rhymes are so strong as are the descriptions in each line. The second line "flashing eyes" is a great analogy. Your wording "time against tide" is superb as is "the mariner's guide". Actually, I don't know why I'm picking out a few words as they are all so perfect. I wish I had a 6 to offer this!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Barry this poem is wonderful! The end rhymes are so strong as are the descriptions in each line. The second line "flashing eyes" is a great analogy. Your wording "time against tide" is superb as is "the mariner's guide". Actually, I don't know why I'm picking out a few words as they are all so perfect. I wish I had a 6 to offer this!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Karyn,
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. Glad you enjoyed it. The accompanying art work just fitted so perfectly.
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
I love lighthouses, and anything to do with them. I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was well written, and the rhyming of your words made for an enjoyable read. The photo was beautiful, and added more meaning to your poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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I love lighthouses, and anything to do with them. I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was well written, and the rhyming of your words made for an enjoyable read. The photo was beautiful, and added more meaning to your poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Jacquelyn,
Thanks for reviewing my poem re lighthouses. They hold a certain mystique for me. Yes, the art work was spot on.
Have a good day and take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.