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Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, though I think a bit sad as I imagine a lonely person accepting the rest of their life, maybe maybe not, a beautiful Haiku getting the reader to think about human emotions and reasons, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, when we get older, we certainly feel more of "winter in our bones." That window is pretty much wide open! Someone should close it. Brr. Enjoyed your poem!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    You are right. I had a hard time finding an exact picture match and forgot it's ajar. I'll look some more. Big Sister, thank you for another kind and helpful review.

    Love,

    Marival
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good sensory appeal. I especially liked:

lets cold air in the room --
winter in her bones

(G, the cold air feels good for a few minutes, but then the whole house gets chilled--all the way to our bones, indeed.)

Love the photos. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

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    Margaret,

    Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words and the excellent five stars review!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your winter haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines - poem flows well - cold air will definitely chill the bones- good job AP

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

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    AP,

    Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words and the excellent five stars review!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

The coldness permeates through your words. She is chilled to the bone as she imagines her fate is my version of this post.

A new Haiku format you have used again - superb!

Mark

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words and the excellent five stars review!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this Haiku club entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I struggle with opening my windows because my allergies are so horrible. Maybe it if got really cold here, I could for a little while, but can't. Once again, you did a wonderful job with this post.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

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    Barbara,

    Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words and the excellent five stars review!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from jessizero
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This was another lovely poem from you. I counted your syllables! :)
I can almost imagine feeling the winter in my own bones. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you yet again.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

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    Jessi,

    Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words and the excellent five stars review!

    Gypsy hugs