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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those dew drops certainly remind me of an icy morn and your few words gave me the chills here as winter is not my favourite time of year, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Those dew drops certainly remind me of an icy morn and your few words gave me the chills here as winter is not my favourite time of year, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Dolly,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
What a beautifully stated 15 syllable contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The presentation is well-done per usual. The visual fits perfectly. Your presentation always has such elegance. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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What a beautifully stated 15 syllable contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The presentation is well-done per usual. The visual fits perfectly. Your presentation always has such elegance. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Ms Sandy
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Pardon my French but this is a great entry.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Pardon my French but this is a great entry.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
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I had no feedback. It was perfection.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a beautiful haiku and the picture is a gorgeous background for it. You always do such a fantastic job with your poetry. I know you will do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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This is a beautiful haiku and the picture is a gorgeous background for it. You always do such a fantastic job with your poetry. I know you will do well in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy
"Live long and prosper."-- Spock, Star Trek
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Spock was my favorite Star Trek character! "Live long and prosper," and Happy New Year!
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! I love the last line because it makes one visually see dew drop!
The artwork is beautiful and compliments the words of this poem.
Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well and had a Great Christmas!....Maria
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! I love the last line because it makes one visually see dew drop!
The artwork is beautiful and compliments the words of this poem.
Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well and had a Great Christmas!....Maria
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy
"Live long and prosper."-- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from royowen
How eloquently you've designed this fifteen syllable ensemble of words to fit this great poem into this most worthy entry in this competition, they were designed for you Gypsy, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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How eloquently you've designed this fifteen syllable ensemble of words to fit this great poem into this most worthy entry in this competition, they were designed for you Gypsy, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy
"Live long and prosper."-- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It flowed smoothly and I like the phrase 'wisp of winter'. It rolls off the tongue. Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It flowed smoothly and I like the phrase 'wisp of winter'. It rolls off the tongue. Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy
"Live long and prosper."-- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Of course, I like alliteration for my poems too.
Good imagery about that dewdrop in your verse and artwork - very nice presentation for this Haiku-esque contest entry.
I congratulate for always choosing appropriate illustrations to pair with your posts.
Mark
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Gypsy,
Of course, I like alliteration for my poems too.
Good imagery about that dewdrop in your verse and artwork - very nice presentation for this Haiku-esque contest entry.
I congratulate for always choosing appropriate illustrations to pair with your posts.
Mark
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
"Live long and prosper" -- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What beautiful, delicate imagery you have created in this 15 syllable poem. It simply sparkles in every way. Good luck in the contest. HAPPY NEW YEAR.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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What beautiful, delicate imagery you have created in this 15 syllable poem. It simply sparkles in every way. Good luck in the contest. HAPPY NEW YEAR.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
"Live long and prosper" -- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from Heather Knight
Hi Marival,
This poem is beautiful.
I love the various alliterations and the beautiful picture.
In my opinion, dew is a lovely topic for a poem.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Hi Marival,
This poem is beautiful.
I love the various alliterations and the beautiful picture.
In my opinion, dew is a lovely topic for a poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
"May you live long and prosper." -- Spock, Star Trek