Devoted
Strong emotions.2 total reviews
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
This is truly an exceptional 3-5-3 poem. Your lines shows the reader the main character line1, what happened line 2, then the most precious event line 3.
Well thought out and a great artwork to enhance this poem.
Congratulations
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This is truly an exceptional 3-5-3 poem. Your lines shows the reader the main character line1, what happened line 2, then the most precious event line 3.
Well thought out and a great artwork to enhance this poem.
Congratulations
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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You made my day with your excellent review, thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Devoted, has the proper formatting and recalls the Passion Play and Christ's sacrifice for a lost world. Good to remind the readers about the Prince of Peace.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This 3-5-3, Devoted, has the proper formatting and recalls the Passion Play and Christ's sacrifice for a lost world. Good to remind the readers about the Prince of Peace.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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You got that right, we need peace. Thank you for your review.