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Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "Mournful Loon's Winter Wail"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
I truthfully never heard the wail of a lion, but based on your words, it must be a sad and lonely wail.
A very emotional and haunting Tanka.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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I truthfully never heard the wail of a lion, but based on your words, it must be a sad and lonely wail.
A very emotional and haunting Tanka.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Merry Christmas eve!
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from aryr
What an incredible tanka and a wonderful picture, Gypsy. The Loon's winter wail is something phenomenal to hear, I do believe it is something one has to hear to describe it. Very well done and sadly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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What an incredible tanka and a wonderful picture, Gypsy. The Loon's winter wail is something phenomenal to hear, I do believe it is something one has to hear to describe it. Very well done and sadly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and helpfull feedback, Aryr. Blessed be and hugs.
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from Sugarray77
I really like this one and can feel the melancholy and angst in the words of this superbly written Tanka. The flow and satori are well done and the embedded emotion adds depth and resonance. Well done, Gypsy.
Melissa
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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I really like this one and can feel the melancholy and angst in the words of this superbly written Tanka. The flow and satori are well done and the embedded emotion adds depth and resonance. Well done, Gypsy.
Melissa
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Melissa,
Thank you very much for your time and kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Great description with the loons' mournful wail spearing the heart. I can visualize that. This is another complete wonderful package you've given us. Thank you for that and Merry Christmas!!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Great description with the loons' mournful wail spearing the heart. I can visualize that. This is another complete wonderful package you've given us. Thank you for that and Merry Christmas!!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Hi, Gypsy.
Thank you for the informative author's notes.
Your tanka is sweet and full of images as the sound of a beautiful loon touches your heart.
Nice poem, Gypsy.
Merry Christmas .
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Hi, Gypsy.
Thank you for the informative author's notes.
Your tanka is sweet and full of images as the sound of a beautiful loon touches your heart.
Nice poem, Gypsy.
Merry Christmas .
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- sounds like a sad story of lost love- outlined in the poem. good job AP
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- sounds like a sad story of lost love- outlined in the poem. good job AP
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from lyenochka
I can totally see that because the loon's sound does such a mournful cry which can "spear the heart." I especially like your description of the loons' habitat "gray dusk mist settles
upon the reeds
where the loons' winter"
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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I can totally see that because the loon's sound does such a mournful cry which can "spear the heart." I especially like your description of the loons' habitat "gray dusk mist settles
upon the reeds
where the loons' winter"
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Big Siter,
I'm glad you like this one, I do too. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----that all well and good, but wouldn't you miss my misery wail? I'd like to think I'd rank right up there with a loon, any loon!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----that all well and good, but wouldn't you miss my misery wail? I'd like to think I'd rank right up there with a loon, any loon!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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LoL
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver