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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Seeing the sunshine makes everyone better! The picture brings to mind the way a hurricane looks; you wrote about the rains destroying people and nature. I am sure they wait for the storms to seize.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Seeing the sunshine makes everyone better! The picture brings to mind the way a hurricane looks; you wrote about the rains destroying people and nature. I am sure they wait for the storms to seize.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
The idea is very clear in the poem and technically correct (9 - 1)
The only thing I keep wondering about is the "unfinished ending" of the last 2 lines.
Anyway, best of luck for the contest
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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The idea is very clear in the poem and technically correct (9 - 1)
The only thing I keep wondering about is the "unfinished ending" of the last 2 lines.
Anyway, best of luck for the contest
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Wendy G
I understand perfectly after all our floods this year, and there were many times when by the power of prayer the rains stopped for a few days and there was some respite for the flood victims. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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I understand perfectly after all our floods this year, and there were many times when by the power of prayer the rains stopped for a few days and there was some respite for the flood victims. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Nonet Poem Contest.
Good nonet form.
Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Wonderful entry for the Nonet Poem Contest.
Good nonet form.
Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Do you mean:
"a (prayer) in my heart" on line five?
I'm loving the sentiment here in this nonet poem, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Do you mean:
"a (prayer) in my heart" on line five?
I'm loving the sentiment here in this nonet poem, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the correction, I did change it, also thankyou for the stars.
Comment from Celyn
This poem follows the rules of the Nonet poetry contest and reads well. However, the line 'a pray in my heart' reads very oddly as surely it should be prayer. You could have said something like 'a heart-felt prayer' instead.
Good luck in the competition
Celyn
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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This poem follows the rules of the Nonet poetry contest and reads well. However, the line 'a pray in my heart' reads very oddly as surely it should be prayer. You could have said something like 'a heart-felt prayer' instead.
Good luck in the competition
Celyn
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the stars even with my blunder.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a fine nonet, correct in syllable count and result in an almost perfect isosceles triangle. I wondered whether 'prayer in my heart' would have been a grammatical improvement on 'a pray in my heart' and I doubt if it would have affected the shape adversely.
For example:
a pray in my heart
prayer in my heart
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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This is a fine nonet, correct in syllable count and result in an almost perfect isosceles triangle. I wondered whether 'prayer in my heart' would have been a grammatical improvement on 'a pray in my heart' and I doubt if it would have affected the shape adversely.
For example:
a pray in my heart
prayer in my heart
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the stars, I didn?t edit it properly, I did change it.
Comment from June Sargent
You very skillfully created drama that escalated to the point of complete helplessness - culminating in a silent prayer. And then relief. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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You very skillfully created drama that escalated to the point of complete helplessness - culminating in a silent prayer. And then relief. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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So much appreciated.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem is delightful and skillfully written. I'm not a poet, but I do enjoy reading poetry. I love the artwork as it compliments the meaning of the words you wrote. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Your poem is delightful and skillfully written. I'm not a poet, but I do enjoy reading poetry. I love the artwork as it compliments the meaning of the words you wrote. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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I appreciate the kind words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Protected, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that even when nature is out to get us, God holds a place in His heart for our survival.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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This nonet, Protected, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that even when nature is out to get us, God holds a place in His heart for our survival.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Yes He does, and thank you for your review.