You're So Lame
Re-Write a Song contest entry. Play video while reading.6 total reviews
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Author,
Ha, ha, ha, ha, this is too funny. I was laughing out loud with this. I have an idea of who you are by the content that you've written, but one way or another, I've voted for you because this is so original. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Hello Author,
Ha, ha, ha, ha, this is too funny. I was laughing out loud with this. I have an idea of who you are by the content that you've written, but one way or another, I've voted for you because this is so original. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the awesome review, Tom. Yeah, I'm pretty easy to spot at times. I tend to write a lot of slander on here. Haha. I really appreciate the generous stars and the support, friend. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. That's all I was really going for. Have yourself a great weekend and upcoming Christmas.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
HAHAHAHAHA, this was too funny. You really did a great job with this re writing of a song. Your lyrics are hilarious. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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HAHAHAHAHA, this was too funny. You really did a great job with this re writing of a song. Your lyrics are hilarious. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the great review, MM55. I love to mock on this site. Haha. I appreciate the stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a fantastic upcoming holiday.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is satirical fun at some of the writers on this writing site. I love the lyrics they make me laugh. Thanks for doing a great makeover of the song you're so vain. You did a wonderful job and I laughed at the thought that it might be me!
Jesse
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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This is satirical fun at some of the writers on this writing site. I love the lyrics they make me laugh. Thanks for doing a great makeover of the song you're so vain. You did a wonderful job and I laughed at the thought that it might be me!
Jesse
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jesse. Yes, we all often take ourselves way too seriously. I'm on this ride for the fun. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you had a chuckle or two at this silliness. Have yourself an awesome Christmas, J.
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Yes, it is too late to lose your sense of humor when you can't see the humor in yourself.
Jesse
Comment from karenina
I remember this song! Didn't she write it about Warren Beatty? Yes--that must have thrilled him because hey, any press is good press...
The first squabble I ever had with my soon-to-be sister-in-law was because I thought Carly was singing "You had one eye in the mirror, as you watched yourself GO OUT ~ and she (much brighter) said it was "watch yourself Gavotte."
WHAT?! What the Devil Dog is a "Gavotte???
Oh, MAN. Merriam Webster sided with HER!
"gavotte--noun
: a dance of French peasant origin marked by the raising rather than sliding of the feet"
LOL.
Score one for her!
This was irreverent in a funny way. I'm laughing! (Unless of course, you meant this about me, in which I'll just Gavotte my way outta here with good luck and Merry Christmas!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I remember this song! Didn't she write it about Warren Beatty? Yes--that must have thrilled him because hey, any press is good press...
The first squabble I ever had with my soon-to-be sister-in-law was because I thought Carly was singing "You had one eye in the mirror, as you watched yourself GO OUT ~ and she (much brighter) said it was "watch yourself Gavotte."
WHAT?! What the Devil Dog is a "Gavotte???
Oh, MAN. Merriam Webster sided with HER!
"gavotte--noun
: a dance of French peasant origin marked by the raising rather than sliding of the feet"
LOL.
Score one for her!
This was irreverent in a funny way. I'm laughing! (Unless of course, you meant this about me, in which I'll just Gavotte my way outta here with good luck and Merry Christmas!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Hahaaaa. Until today, when I looked it up, I always thought she was sliding 'go by it' in there. Carly and Webster taught me a new word today. Haha. I wonder if I'll ever use it, acting like I have my crap together when people ask me what it is. Lol. When I went searching for popular songs, this one came up and I just had to use it to slander the masses on here. I love doing that. Haha. Thank you so much for the hilarious review, Karenina. I'm glad you had a chuckle. I laughed a few times along the way writing it. Have yourself a wonderful Christmas too, K. Thank you again.
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You would not believe how many whole lines I sang wrong in those old songs!
Bennie has regrets?
Giggle
Oh!
Bennie and THE JETS!
Geesh!
😂
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You would not believe how many whole lines I sang wrong in those old songs!
Bennie has regrets?
Giggle
Oh!
Bennie and THE JETS!
Geesh!
😂
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You would not believe how many whole lines I sang wrong in those old songs!
Bennie has regrets?
Giggle
Oh!
Bennie and THE JETS!
Geesh!
😂
Comment from humpwhistle
Terrific! The words even fit the melody--what a novel idea! Great song for a parody, too. The robot/clot bit is inspired! I wish you might have come up with something closer to 'clouds in my coffee, clouds in my coffee', but now I'm nit-picking.
Best of luck at the polls!
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Terrific! The words even fit the melody--what a novel idea! Great song for a parody, too. The robot/clot bit is inspired! I wish you might have come up with something closer to 'clouds in my coffee, clouds in my coffee', but now I'm nit-picking.
Best of luck at the polls!
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Wow, thank you, my friend. I sure didn't plan on seeing a sixer on this ridiculous piece. Haha. I'm totally open to suggestions for a closer version to clouds. I've been up all night working and played with this piece tired and a few shots in. Any help on getting it closer to the original would be greatly appreciated. Hopefully I'll find it as humorous when I wake up later tonight. I had fun with it though. Thank you for the awesome review and giant sixer, Lee. I'm glad you liked my silly offering. Have a good one, friend.
Comment from Bill Schott
I guess there is no more ANTICIPATION as to who these lyrics are about. This is a great throat stomp on that other person. Really, NOBODY DOES IT BETTER.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I guess there is no more ANTICIPATION as to who these lyrics are about. This is a great throat stomp on that other person. Really, NOBODY DOES IT BETTER.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Haha. These aren't about anyone in particular. I'm just having my usual fun mocking folks on here. Lol. I looked up a list of well known songs and when this one came up I just had to go with it. Thank you for the hilarious review and stars, Bill. I really appreciate it.