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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

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My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from Maria Millsaps
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I like it Doc Rick. You have a way with metaphors that is compiling and engaging. The passing from life to death can only be imagined. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
    Glad that this was pleasing to you.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Kaiku
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These words immediately came to mind:

Where one dwells
Is a personal choice.
Where one dwells
Is that person's voice.

Existing for one's sake
Or living within God's grace.
One's choice will ring true
When day's have come due.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
    I like that.
    The Great Equalizer shalleth erase all those Nasty and Evil Satanic Sins; replacing them with the Purity Bleesed Love from Above.
    Thanks for Absorbation.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by Kaiku on 16-Nov-2022
    ;-) Have a great day.