Comment from
Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, a dog talking to Frosty the Snowman. I enjoyed
your fun poem, Rhonnie. Your one liner spoke volumes.
I could see the dog telling Frosty to stay put. The art choice
was perfect for your words. I wonder if the cat told Frosty
to stay put that he was off to torment the dog.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I like how you used the descriptive phrase
and title to lead into the poem.
-You definitely have one line, and
give the suggestion that the dog
is having way too much fun in the snow,
but he will be back to play some more!!!!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022