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"The Book of Death"

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Is the living really alive and living?

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Comment from country ranch writer
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Sounds like Niss Hooky has herself in Quite A fix!sge must be off her neds and needs to be calmed down by calling in the help squad to take her away is she can once again get her head on straight.




10/30/2022----8:33 pm

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
    Working hard at putting her in the hospital@
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Celyn
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I didn't really get this poem as it seemed to jump around quite a lot I also did not get the imagery - sorry. As a comment on mental issues, I think it works but the ideas are quite hard to follow.
Celyn

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
    Thanks for tour review.
    Doctor Ricky1024