The Book of Sorrows
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "What's Wrong with Doctor Ricky?"Fine Poetry in Depth.
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Comment from susand3022
Hey Ricky, I'm just going to ask one thing, and only because it's a pet peeve of mine... Do you really think that we needed the definition of "exactly?" I mean, if someone doesn't know what THAT means, they should certainly look it up. It's a pretty normal word, from about the age of 7... or under.
Aside from that, Ricky has nothing to feel unwanted, or unloved about! We all want him here, surely! What a face! :(
Susan
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Hey Ricky, I'm just going to ask one thing, and only because it's a pet peeve of mine... Do you really think that we needed the definition of "exactly?" I mean, if someone doesn't know what THAT means, they should certainly look it up. It's a pretty normal word, from about the age of 7... or under.
Aside from that, Ricky has nothing to feel unwanted, or unloved about! We all want him here, surely! What a face! :(
Susan
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Well then Susan my dear you need to exactly reread the editor's notes.
Thanks,
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"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed Rick, if it wasn't for the grace given us by the wonderful grace of God, I guess niether of us would be here at the moment my friend, we done, nicely written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Oh yes indeed Rick, if it wasn't for the grace given us by the wonderful grace of God, I guess niether of us would be here at the moment my friend, we done, nicely written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed writing this one Roy and I enjoyed your review as well.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Well this was another strong write! Although sad to see that about your son. I know I've wished you the best and prayers before but I would like to do that again. As for your poem that image and the poem go together so well to share your story.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Well this was another strong write! Although sad to see that about your son. I know I've wished you the best and prayers before but I would like to do that again. As for your poem that image and the poem go together so well to share your story.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks Michael but when it comes to Grief and Sadness?
Time and hundreds of thousands of journal poems have long washed it away!
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