Pays to be kind
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Scrooge found himself in a place where he did not enjoy himself and forbade all around him to enjoy themselves. He did have a heart and his conscience was eventually touched by tiny tim and things changed as he became Uncle Scrooge, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Scrooge found himself in a place where he did not enjoy himself and forbade all around him to enjoy themselves. He did have a heart and his conscience was eventually touched by tiny tim and things changed as he became Uncle Scrooge, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thank you Dolly
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your poem and the rhyming. We see a different side of Scrooge in your poem. He did find the true meaning of the holidays; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Like your poem and the rhyming. We see a different side of Scrooge in your poem. He did find the true meaning of the holidays; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thankyou
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Tricky Rhyme Time writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words, especially about scrooge and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Tricky Rhyme Time writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words, especially about scrooge and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank you Teri
Comment from Audrey Lena
This is a great perspective on the Christmas Carol story. In your poem you really painted a picture of how the character grew while using some weird words given to you by the prompt. I love how you showed, not a backstory, but a continuation for Scrooge. It was also cool to see how you depicted the lessons that he learned-leaving the past behind, being kind, sharing, and learning how to smile and unwind!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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This is a great perspective on the Christmas Carol story. In your poem you really painted a picture of how the character grew while using some weird words given to you by the prompt. I love how you showed, not a backstory, but a continuation for Scrooge. It was also cool to see how you depicted the lessons that he learned-leaving the past behind, being kind, sharing, and learning how to smile and unwind!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much 🙂
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Pays to be Kind, has all the required words and reminds the readers of Ebeneezer Scrooge's conversion from a grumpy old misanthrope to a gentle and kind oldster.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This poem, Pays to be Kind, has all the required words and reminds the readers of Ebeneezer Scrooge's conversion from a grumpy old misanthrope to a gentle and kind oldster.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you