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Comment from Terry Broxson
Too bad he couldn't sing, he could get a really big record deal! What a hoot. You accepted quite a challenge for this poem. Good luck, Good job! Terry
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Too bad he couldn't sing, he could get a really big record deal! What a hoot. You accepted quite a challenge for this poem. Good luck, Good job! Terry
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Thank you Terry. I really appreciate your kind review and comments. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my silly poem.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Imaginative. How old are you? Just kidding but it feels as if you were writing for a 5th grade creative writing class. I love it, but then I am simple-minded. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Imaginative. How old are you? Just kidding but it feels as if you were writing for a 5th grade creative writing class. I love it, but then I am simple-minded. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Thanks Tom. (I think) If you look at the prompt instructions, it might be a little bit easier to understand why I took this direction with the poem. When given strange words to use and only one rhyme, it can be creative or it can be boring, but most have thought it more worthy then a 5th grade level. Lol
Thanks for the kind words my friend.
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No ill intent intended, in fact, just the opposite, for if I had received my review I would have smiled recalling back to what might have been the best days of my life.
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No worries. Just a little overly sensitive right now.
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Ok
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I still love ya tho!
Comment from TPAC
A very charming read, deposited many delighting tib bit for the reader to absorb, revealing a compiling story line as well in this well structured creation by this writer. A super read in my given opinion about this work.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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A very charming read, deposited many delighting tib bit for the reader to absorb, revealing a compiling story line as well in this well structured creation by this writer. A super read in my given opinion about this work.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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I thank you so very much for your very kind comments for my poem. A bit of a challenge, but a fun one. Thanks again my friend.
Comment from Boogienights
A terrific poem with a happy ending...my favorite. All the words were used creatively and the end lines all rhyme. This is a great contest entry, best of luck. :)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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A terrific poem with a happy ending...my favorite. All the words were used creatively and the end lines all rhyme. This is a great contest entry, best of luck. :)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Sharon, as always you are so sweet. Thank you for your very kind words for my silly poem. This one was a bit of a challenge, but lots of fun.
Thanks again my dear friend.
Comment from Ulla
Hehehe, I loved it. You really made this abe come alive and you also made him a very likable one. Yes, he's different but that what makes him so endearing. He's reflecting real life. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Hehehe, I loved it. You really made this abe come alive and you also made him a very likable one. Yes, he's different but that what makes him so endearing. He's reflecting real life. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Ulla, once again you are so sweet. I thank you for having a little fun with me and for your kind words for this silly poem.
Comment from evilynne
That was just too much fun to read! You incorporated the needed words nicely and rhymed as requited. The accompanying picture is great. Good luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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That was just too much fun to read! You incorporated the needed words nicely and rhymed as requited. The accompanying picture is great. Good luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Evi for this fun review, which gave me a big smile in return. I can't tell you how very much I appreciate your lovely words and generous six stars. Thanks again my dear friend.
Comment from Janilou
Such a cute poem and I really enjoyed the artwork you chose to go with it. A happy ending for the lucky and talented Oragutan!
I didn't see anything to correct and it appears that you followed the contest rules.
Well done and all the best!
Jan
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Such a cute poem and I really enjoyed the artwork you chose to go with it. A happy ending for the lucky and talented Oragutan!
I didn't see anything to correct and it appears that you followed the contest rules.
Well done and all the best!
Jan
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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You are so very kind Janilou! Thank you so much for your very kind words.
I appreciate it very much!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer!
What a hoot!
I applaud your creativity and usage of all the required words!
Evidence of joy and smiles in your writing - not to mention end rhymes.
We all need joy and smiles in our lives!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Hello, Mystery Writer!
What a hoot!
I applaud your creativity and usage of all the required words!
Evidence of joy and smiles in your writing - not to mention end rhymes.
We all need joy and smiles in our lives!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Diane, you just get sweeter all the time. I so appreciate your lovely review of my silly poem, which was a lot more of a challenge than I expected it to be. So thank you so much my dear friend for your kind words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Red Headed Orangutan, presented with a uni-rhyming formatting, tells the tale of Crabby Scrooge the Czar's rise from zoo animal to rock star. Fun.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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This poem, The Red Headed Orangutan, presented with a uni-rhyming formatting, tells the tale of Crabby Scrooge the Czar's rise from zoo animal to rock star. Fun.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thanks Bill for reading and reviewing my silly poem
Comment from Sanku
This was great fun.the story of the orangutan who escaped in the car and became an entertainer! great imagination.You have used all the prescribed words and maintained monorhyme through out.all the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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This was great fun.the story of the orangutan who escaped in the car and became an entertainer! great imagination.You have used all the prescribed words and maintained monorhyme through out.all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Awe, thank you so much! That means an awful lot to me and I appreciate your kind words. And I love how you always have something extra nice to say.. I am so touched by your kind words, my very dear friend!