A Shot At Love
will a Tweet serve as Cupid's arrow?16 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Simplistic in form. I love the thought. And if you were a part of the Unknown soldier unit, congratulations for being selected. That would have been quite an honor, and a challenging two years.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Simplistic in form. I love the thought. And if you were a part of the Unknown soldier unit, congratulations for being selected. That would have been quite an honor, and a challenging two years.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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I almost went with guard unit for the "Unknown Soldier" but out of respect for that National monument and the honor guard, I went with a lesser image and let people draw their own conclusions. The reality of what that wonderful monument stands for does not lend itself to even light-hearted humor in my opinion. Thanks for reviewing, Dennis
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is well conceived and realized.
You have done a great job with the prompt, very imaginative.
I appreciate the presentation, although I would consider a larger font.
The theme is relevant and relatable.
The rhymes work well with out force and flow smoothly down the page.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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This is well conceived and realized.
You have done a great job with the prompt, very imaginative.
I appreciate the presentation, although I would consider a larger font.
The theme is relevant and relatable.
The rhymes work well with out force and flow smoothly down the page.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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"You have done a great job with the prompt, very imaginative."
Thank you, will be keeping this for the "bad days" when my genius is not recognized. :) Thanks, Dennis
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Comment from Raul1
You have very good use of your words chosen in your poem. Well written. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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You have very good use of your words chosen in your poem. Well written. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks Raul!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Wow! You did it, and with style.
Good work.
"Use these words", or "Not using these words" are challenging. Not being a poet, I almost always take a pass. You did very well on this one.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Wow! You did it, and with style.
Good work.
"Use these words", or "Not using these words" are challenging. Not being a poet, I almost always take a pass. You did very well on this one.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks Wayne! Appreciated, Dennis
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem, Deniz22. I liked the couplet rhyming,
the perfect image, and the message. You spelled out his
intentions well. I liked the 'info sea.'
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed your poem, Deniz22. I liked the couplet rhyming,
the perfect image, and the message. You spelled out his
intentions well. I liked the 'info sea.'
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks Jen, appreciated as always, Dennis
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words interesting, descriptive and creative. I liked
the author's words above the title! The author's words are filled with hope
and a strong desire. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
awesome and compliments this poem. Have a great day!.....Maria
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I found the author's words interesting, descriptive and creative. I liked
the author's words above the title! The author's words are filled with hope
and a strong desire. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
awesome and compliments this poem. Have a great day!.....Maria
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I find myself in complete harmony with your review. Thank you! :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and poem to go with it, Deniz.
-A good job including the required words.
-I like your opening lines with the tweet.
-Each couplet after that shows how he
was captivated by this girl.
-A good closing couplet, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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-Good image and poem to go with it, Deniz.
-A good job including the required words.
-I like your opening lines with the tweet.
-Each couplet after that shows how he
was captivated by this girl.
-A good closing couplet, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Pam.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Nicolee Maree
I thought this was quite nice. Simple and to the point. I think it made you wish for something new, and to something or someone that may make new beginnings.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I thought this was quite nice. Simple and to the point. I think it made you wish for something new, and to something or someone that may make new beginnings.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you for a very thoughtful review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was awesome. I liked the visual I got. A soldier unable to leave his post is struck by someone passing by. His duty to country fighting his hearts desire. Side note; I hope he finds her. Lol. Wonderfully done. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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This was awesome. I liked the visual I got. A soldier unable to leave his post is struck by someone passing by. His duty to country fighting his hearts desire. Side note; I hope he finds her. Lol. Wonderfully done. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate a good reader who "gets" what I'm trying to lay down. Comma corrections come and comma corrections go, but good commentary is more lasting. :) Dennis
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
There is no telling how many great relationships have been passed by.
However, they are obviously not meant to be. I believe in destiny. If someone is meant to be together, they will eventually find one another.
Thank you for sharing this great poem. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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There is no telling how many great relationships have been passed by.
However, they are obviously not meant to be. I believe in destiny. If someone is meant to be together, they will eventually find one another.
Thank you for sharing this great poem. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reviewing and commenting. Have you ever read how Martin Luther got married and then fell in love with his wife over a period of time? Interesting.
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No, I will have to research the story. Thank you. You are welcome.
