Downtown Magic
Old New York6 total reviews
Comment from Jewell McChesney
This is an excellent poem and thank you for choosing my artwork! The description of downtown magic makes me want to visit! Perfect rhyme and meter. Love how my art works with it!
I just emailed you because I hadn't seen your notice at FAR yet. You can message me here or email.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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This is an excellent poem and thank you for choosing my artwork! The description of downtown magic makes me want to visit! Perfect rhyme and meter. Love how my art works with it!
I just emailed you because I hadn't seen your notice at FAR yet. You can message me here or email.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you jewell
Comment from BermyBye50
Carlos' girl,
This is a lovely short write that perfectly describes in well-written creative rhymes. You've painted an excellent picture of old New York in this brilliant write. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Carlos' girl,
This is a lovely short write that perfectly describes in well-written creative rhymes. You've painted an excellent picture of old New York in this brilliant write. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you Eugene.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job of describing the sense of place
of your old NY, Judith. I enjoyed reading your poem. Great
job with the smooth flow, the rhymes, the image, and
the fun message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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You did a great job of describing the sense of place
of your old NY, Judith. I enjoyed reading your poem. Great
job with the smooth flow, the rhymes, the image, and
the fun message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I described my old apartment in ny jan. I got lucky here with the rhymes.
Thank you for your kind review.
Judith
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😊🐈⬛
Comment from Susan Newell
Judith,
This is just a fun one about enjoying a quiet moment in time amid the hubbub of a big city. I liked the French doors, tin ceilings, good book and a tabby cat. Fun.
Sue
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Judith,
This is just a fun one about enjoying a quiet moment in time amid the hubbub of a big city. I liked the French doors, tin ceilings, good book and a tabby cat. Fun.
Sue
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you. Again.
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There goes one of my two reviews. I wish other people got the chance to read my work.
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I know. It sucks that you have to "promote" to be read. Do you want me to stop reviewing? I became a fan so I get a notice when you post.
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No, I am glad you enjoy my work. You should review as often as you like. Maybe like myself many writers simply don't do reviews very often.
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Okay.
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It is a bit mystifying to me why people glom on to only a few writers and become " fans". I guess they need that for psychological reasons. But this is just a writing site. And there are over 400 writers
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If I read something I like, I become a "fan" so as not to miss something new. Otherwise, I'm apt to miss something I would like to read.
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It just puzzles me why i comminucate endlessly w the same people. Every day. Feels like high school lol
Comment from Reso22
Beautiful rhythm and rhyme scheme. You seem like a natural and I have a feeling that you wrote this with ease, a natural talent if I had to guess as a complete stranger with no clue. Anyway, excellent poem! Keep up the good work. Good luck to you!
Best,
Resa
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Beautiful rhythm and rhyme scheme. You seem like a natural and I have a feeling that you wrote this with ease, a natural talent if I had to guess as a complete stranger with no clue. Anyway, excellent poem! Keep up the good work. Good luck to you!
Best,
Resa
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I try to keep my verse very simple and honest. My great inspiration is the songwriter Bob Dylan. I try to emulate him
Comment from Sally Law
I think the old New York City is the fondest one in my memory. It has changed, but maybe hope for revival? Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous poem,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I think the old New York City is the fondest one in my memory. It has changed, but maybe hope for revival? Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous poem,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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This is a loving memory of my old home in the city.
Thank you for reviewing my work
Yours,
Judith
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Ah, so sweet. I enjoyed it. Sal XOs
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Im.glad you liked it. I must get a cat for my apartment here in New Jersey and some more antiques 😂