Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Where do you keep the heads? I liked it, though fantasy is not something I tried to write yet. You are multi-talented so how do you approach fantasy writing as opposed to any other? Karen

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

So my original writing endeavor is a six book series called Thirteen Kings. I?ve been putting the fourth book The Eighth Tribe into FS now. The first three books were okay, but this one is getting good reviews. In fact. Everyone who read the series offsite said the fourth and fifth books are the best ones. Fantasy is actually my favorite drama and in this piece, Tronin, is actually a character from
My series who was famed for slaying two dragons.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 18-Aug-2023

You have been here a long time and I an having to play catch up. I Imagine I would like what you wrote having someone reading a phone book. I was told to write what I feel and what I want to read. Well, I can't write what I like in novels because it isn't in me. I like to write mysteries,nostalgia and comedies of all types. And I discovered Poetry! I am going to try to adapt an earlier long story into bite size chunks. Gwen said no more than 1800 max. And the closer to 1,000 the better. Rachele wants to interview me. I said haven't I been made do over all ready? she said no, that folks don't really no me. And they would
like me and read my stuff more. I said okay. Am I nuts?

Karen

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Nah do the interview. She is one of the big dogs here so it is an honor. I?ve only been here a year.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 18-Aug-2023

Only a year? What do you do write in your sleep? you have a prodigious amount of writing here. A lot of people have helped me. I tell them all to speak their minds and pick at the scab. I think they like it that don't have to hold back and be precious about.
Karen

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

That is a good quality. I just started writing and it is pouring out like an untamed river. (I did have some books done years back. ).

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 18-Aug-2023

I can't bother myself with writing to you right now, it seems I am booked for an interview!haha Karen

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Ha! Look who?s big time now!

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 18-Aug-2023

I will read them how many are complete?

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 18-Aug-2023

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I am riding high and expecting a fall. But if you snooze you lose. Karen

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

The first three books are on FS. I?m starting on #4. People didn?t care for them.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

You've used some good alliteration. the r's become almost onomatopoetic with a growling sound and the s's effect several images, hissing, sizzzing, the ice and the clean slicing of the knife. Great work.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022

Thanks. It got it?s butt kicked in the competition but that didn?t delineate from the joy of writing it. I appreciate the review!

reply by Liz O'Neill on 27-Sep-2022

***Smile***

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

An epic battle condensed into 80 words. You conjured visuals in my mind and told the end of the conflict with a little inplication of context and what went before. Nicely done.

Mike

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022

Thanks!

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm, well this a fantasy tale of a dragon slayer. The fight scene is quick and easily visible. Eighty words are not a lot to work with. But we know why the dragon lost.

Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022

Thanks!