Tanka Collection
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Comment from kahpot
A beautiful read and presentation, I do need some help understanding
"sthat" in the third line, the image of being alone within a crowd is very familiar, ****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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A beautiful read and presentation, I do need some help understanding
"sthat" in the third line, the image of being alone within a crowd is very familiar, ****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, kym. I fixed that error. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. I really enjoyed the wording of your tanka. It brought together your thoughts from the first line of your narrative notes. It is truly a possibility to feel lost in a crowd. I enjoyed the concept of the picture of the boat and all those fireflies and then of course the firefly at the end of your tanka. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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What a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. I really enjoyed the wording of your tanka. It brought together your thoughts from the first line of your narrative notes. It is truly a possibility to feel lost in a crowd. I enjoyed the concept of the picture of the boat and all those fireflies and then of course the firefly at the end of your tanka. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
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You are most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy,
your notes, and poem by Faraaz Kazi are exquisite... so to top them would take some doing.
Okay, you hit on my favorite colour and when I read beauty within words and they connect to me personally, it's like the poem was written for and to me. That in itself is the aim of every great writer... to bond to one's audience individually, as if it was them you are speaking to.
A truly beautifully composed and presented Tanka.
I am a fan with admiration and awe to your talent and art.
Always look forward to reading your posts.
With our thoughts we create...
perpetual motion.
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Hi Gypsy,
your notes, and poem by Faraaz Kazi are exquisite... so to top them would take some doing.
Okay, you hit on my favorite colour and when I read beauty within words and they connect to me personally, it's like the poem was written for and to me. That in itself is the aim of every great writer... to bond to one's audience individually, as if it was them you are speaking to.
A truly beautifully composed and presented Tanka.
I am a fan with admiration and awe to your talent and art.
Always look forward to reading your posts.
With our thoughts we create...
perpetual motion.
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Lord James, it's always a pleasure to hear from you and read your exquisite reviews. It's written for you, and reviewers like you, who understand me and 'get me'.
Thank you with all my heart for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
The poem and author notes are written by me, the beatiful quote is written by Faraaz Kazi...I love it.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
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As always my Q
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As always Queen Gypsy... it is my pleasure to be in the inner-circle of understanding and beauty within your art.
Yes, I love your notes... and yes, I love the quote as well.
James.
"Poetry incites stimulus to the beauty of one's mind and thought." Jumbo
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Thank you :)
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Yes, me too, my K
Comment from lyenochka
I am not sure about the "tug and pull" but the "lonely firefly" "amidst a myriad of lights" resonates with me. I definitely feel more lonely in a crowd and don't like large parties. Lovely presentation!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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I am not sure about the "tug and pull" but the "lonely firefly" "amidst a myriad of lights" resonates with me. I definitely feel more lonely in a crowd and don't like large parties. Lovely presentation!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, well penned. The lonely firefly sits in the night admist a myriad of lights. How sad for the firefly and for people who feel like this. I know many people who are like this. Who knows what the reason may be.
G, your poem is filled with good imagery and is a pleasure to read.
Lovely artwrok choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Hi Gypsy, well penned. The lonely firefly sits in the night admist a myriad of lights. How sad for the firefly and for people who feel like this. I know many people who are like this. Who knows what the reason may be.
G, your poem is filled with good imagery and is a pleasure to read.
Lovely artwrok choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Hah hah, a very good short poem. I'm always attuned with the metaphoric signs that regale our vision every day, but yours must super charged Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Hah hah, a very good short poem. I'm always attuned with the metaphoric signs that regale our vision every day, but yours must super charged Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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Most welcome