Comment from
oliver818
Nice poem, you capture a fun scene here. You did a great job of using all the words, and I especially like what you did with 'spider.' Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
You are welcome. Have a good holiday.
Comment from
Iza Deleanu
You managed to create a real saga with the given words. Your poem is the best I read so far for this contest: it starts with a spider and comes back to the same story opener: "
Some spiders are found in houses I know.
There's five types of webs spiders will grow.
Some spiders dwell beneath rocks on the ground.
There's several types of spiders around." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022