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Joy to the World

Naani - 23 syllables

12 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Joy to the World, includes the required words and speaks to bringing a rejuvenating spirit to art that can exist into the future. Nice.

 Comment Written 13-May-2022

Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Just recently an artist sketched a picture of a popular Hollywood star. It went for megabucks. Many times, there are drawings that do not succeed, but if you have the right buyer or person, they can be revived or bring it back to life.

 Comment Written 12-May-2022

Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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I don't get it. All the required words were used but the message given is a little convoluted. I don't think the words fit in the places they are used all that well. Still, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-May-2022


reply by the author on 12-May-2022
    Think of it like spices adding taste or "life" to a dull meal. The palette holes the paint or spices that do the same to a blanket canvas. Thanks for your review .
Comment from Cathy M
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This poem is itself, abstract, yet the meaning is clear. The artwork you chose goes well with the poem. Good Luck in the contest. You created a solid piece.

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the These Words writing prompt contest. You did add graphic - joy - death - spice as asked in the rules. The theme was interesting and was easy to understand. I would recommend it.

I like short poems and your naani is well written. I like the presentation too.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

Comment from Quoiky
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Interesting read. You used all the necessary words well. The 'canvas' from death line was very powerful. I wish you the very best luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 11-May-2022

Comment from lyenochka
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I think a short poem that logically uses all the required words is more challenging. You did a great job using art as the focus to revive a "dead" canvas and bring joy. Hope you do well in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

Comment from jessizero
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You did a good job with the words supplied. I like the story you told in your four line poem. Thank you for sharing this here. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

Comment from LisaMay
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I enjoyed your poem as I identified with the words through being a graphic artist myself. To bring an empty canvas to life with a colourful palette is a great way to spread some joy.

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

Comment from JoannaN
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You successfully managed to combine all the required words into a story that makes sense and it coherent. The picture you have chosen illustrates your poem well.

 Comment Written 10-May-2022