A Scent of Jasmine
a jisei poem for the Japanese club challenge6 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely jisel poem presentation June. I love the scent of jasmine and you are right in your last line, the essence remains on the breeze. Beautifully written, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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This is a lovely jisel poem presentation June. I love the scent of jasmine and you are right in your last line, the essence remains on the breeze. Beautifully written, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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My mom's favorite flower was the gardenia. And anytime I smell that scent, I think of her. It's amazing how certain scents can trigger deep memories. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Scent of Jasmine
by June Sargent
Beautiful jisei poem for the Japanese club challenge. I love the presentation and the composition of your jisei is perfect...very zen. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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A Scent of Jasmine
by June Sargent
Beautiful jisei poem for the Japanese club challenge. I love the presentation and the composition of your jisei is perfect...very zen. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I?m happy you enjoyed this jisei. If we?ve made a positive impact on someone?s life - that is a sweet sensation. Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from Mark D. R.
June, This post has a beautiful aroma. Words and artwork flow together in a nicely wrapped package.
Even after the flower has wilted/withered, its scent can still be 'sensed.'
Mark
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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June, This post has a beautiful aroma. Words and artwork flow together in a nicely wrapped package.
Even after the flower has wilted/withered, its scent can still be 'sensed.'
Mark
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this jisei poem. We all hope to leave a positive impact on people's lives - like the lingering scent of a flower after it's gone. Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a lovely presentation, June.
The image and color scheme are
perfect for your well thought out
words. I believe this poem could
be about the actual flower, or
a woman who's gone from her
lover, husband etc.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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This is a lovely presentation, June.
The image and color scheme are
perfect for your well thought out
words. I believe this poem could
be about the actual flower, or
a woman who's gone from her
lover, husband etc.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this jisei poem. We all hope to leave a positive impact on people's lives - like the lingering scent of a flower after it's gone. Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments.
Comment from karenina
I didn't know of this form. How wonderful, to capture final thoughts before one's death. How much more wonderful when such words as this poem, issues forth ~ a reminder that each of us will leave this earthly body ~ yet all of us will leave something ethereal and eternal as well.
Beautifully penned!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I didn't know of this form. How wonderful, to capture final thoughts before one's death. How much more wonderful when such words as this poem, issues forth ~ a reminder that each of us will leave this earthly body ~ yet all of us will leave something ethereal and eternal as well.
Beautifully penned!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this jisei poem. We all hope to leave a positive impact on people's lives - like the lingering scent of a flower after it's gone. Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments.
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What a profound tradition! It touched me...
Comment from BethShelby
I wasn't familiar with this type of poetry but it is a good reminder that our life can be remember in a positive way even after we no longer live as a part of this world.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I wasn't familiar with this type of poetry but it is a good reminder that our life can be remember in a positive way even after we no longer live as a part of this world.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this jisei poem. We all hope to leave a positive impact on people's lives - like the lingering scent of a flower after it's gone. Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments.