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Comment from Goosey Gander
What poem is this? It's fantastic and I love the format! I did have one suggestion, however: You started out with a lovely meter and rhythm, but you sort of lost it on the fourth-ish line. Otherwise, your poem is amazing!
-GGG
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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What poem is this? It's fantastic and I love the format! I did have one suggestion, however: You started out with a lovely meter and rhythm, but you sort of lost it on the fourth-ish line. Otherwise, your poem is amazing!
-GGG
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Hello, dear GGG! Oh, it is an Etheree, and you are completely right! I did lose it about the fourth-ish line. I will see if I can fix it...thank you!
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'course! I am here to help!!!
-GGG
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's amazing how those feisty people who never seem to slow down just keep on ticking along while the rest of struggle to get up and down. I guess, what keeps them going to strong is keeping going. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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It's amazing how those feisty people who never seem to slow down just keep on ticking along while the rest of struggle to get up and down. I guess, what keeps them going to strong is keeping going. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Ha, that what Mom always says; that she keeps going because she keeps going! However, she doesn't write many poems. LOL
Comment from LisaMay
The energy of some mothers - such as yours - is amazing. What they do for their families shows true devotion. Your series of poems has highlighted what wonderful family memories that house holds.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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The energy of some mothers - such as yours - is amazing. What they do for their families shows true devotion. Your series of poems has highlighted what wonderful family memories that house holds.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Dear LisaMay, I so appreciate your following along this April journey with me! It was therapeutic for me to record my memories before our family home changes ownership in just a few days. Mom came last week to collect my key. Sad. But, life goes on!
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There'll be other keys and other changes. I can well imagine how therapeutic writing about it has been... sort of closure.
Comment from Kim Kinakin Tuckey
Wow! That is an amazing memory to have of the day before your wedding. You have done a good job in immortalizing it in poetry. Very original topic., I hope you Mom likes it!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Wow! That is an amazing memory to have of the day before your wedding. You have done a good job in immortalizing it in poetry. Very original topic., I hope you Mom likes it!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Nice to meet you, Kim! Thanks so much for stopping by! It is a very unique memory, but a part of my memories of our home. I will have to show this one to my mom! Sending good wishes your way!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What an amazing Mother you have and she sounds like she has endless energy too. I once worked all night on a ball gown for my sister to surprise her in the morning, it was a wonderful gift. I enjoyed your fine write full of fond memories, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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What an amazing Mother you have and she sounds like she has endless energy too. I once worked all night on a ball gown for my sister to surprise her in the morning, it was a wonderful gift. I enjoyed your fine write full of fond memories, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Oh, dear Dolly, it is always wonderful to hear from you. Your story reminds me of something we would see on Cinderella, making a ball gown for your sister. That is a wonderful story! Thank you for reading and sharing!
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Thank you for you reply, my sister was thrilled at the time and I lent her my necklace to complete the outfit, she looked amazing, that was back in the 1980s, love Dolly x
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my goodness! Your mother is so full of energy! Thanks for the lovely tribute to your mother's devotion and energy. My mom's like that, too. Good etheree and presentation!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Oh my goodness! Your mother is so full of energy! Thanks for the lovely tribute to your mother's devotion and energy. My mom's like that, too. Good etheree and presentation!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for following me through this April journey, Helen! Here?s to our amazing mothers!
