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Questions about nature for children

2 total reviews 
Comment from Timmory Pisciotta
Excellent
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this was so so cute It made me really smile. I could definitely see this being something read at Sunday school to the kids. It is so bright and uplifting I really like it. The Line with "Animals" in it has a few odd characters added into the word though, I'm not sure if that was intentional or not, but either way very sweet poem.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much. I'm glad you pointed out the symbols.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a lovely poem filled with the kinds of questions children ask and the perfect answer for all of them. You have a few weird symbols in line 3, but every word is perfect. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much for this very great review-The sixes are so appreciated!