Hooray for holidays
We're going away ...10 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Not excited about going on a vacation? This little girl could not take her toys with her, so she decided to stay home; many times, that happens in real life where a friend goes instead of a sister.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Not excited about going on a vacation? This little girl could not take her toys with her, so she decided to stay home; many times, that happens in real life where a friend goes instead of a sister.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for reviewing. Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What I see in this contest is many boys and girls writing poetry to and if they themselves were being told the words as they sat upon one's knees. All of these are very good. The voting will be difficult.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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What I see in this contest is many boys and girls writing poetry to and if they themselves were being told the words as they sat upon one's knees. All of these are very good. The voting will be difficult.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you Tom. There were indeed lots of good entries. I appreciate your words always.
Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the For A Child writing prompt contest. I love the colorful presentation and imagery. Great expresive word choices. The rhymes don't seem forced.
Friends are so special :)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Excellent entry for the For A Child writing prompt contest. I love the colorful presentation and imagery. Great expresive word choices. The rhymes don't seem forced.
Friends are so special :)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy-I greatly appreciate your positive review and good wishes.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem for children, Hooray for Holidays, begins well with a fun vacation for the offing until the need for toys meets the lack of space in the conveyance.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This poem for children, Hooray for Holidays, begins well with a fun vacation for the offing until the need for toys meets the lack of space in the conveyance.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thanks Bill. That?s a good summary!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
If it were up to children, this is what the car would look like. Long as they had all their toys, they would be happy. A car can only hold so much. However, they try to find room for just one more item. I like your picture. And thankfully, we do not see people riding around with such a load. Thank you for the great story.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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If it were up to children, this is what the car would look like. Long as they had all their toys, they would be happy. A car can only hold so much. However, they try to find room for just one more item. I like your picture. And thankfully, we do not see people riding around with such a load. Thank you for the great story.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much Carolyn. So glad you enjoyed it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Other like your dad may point at yours, but in going on a holiday, away from home, but took everything, to you not staff, for you cannot keep all those at home, you and your mom, and Billy, all are making joy going for a holiday; no other jobs but to enjoy the holiday; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Other like your dad may point at yours, but in going on a holiday, away from home, but took everything, to you not staff, for you cannot keep all those at home, you and your mom, and Billy, all are making joy going for a holiday; no other jobs but to enjoy the holiday; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate your time and thoughts.
Comment from joann r romei
This was adorable and I can invision. a group of children enjoying the sing song effect. It filled the requirements of the contest rules perfectly. Good luck
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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This was adorable and I can invision. a group of children enjoying the sing song effect. It filled the requirements of the contest rules perfectly. Good luck
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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That?s a very encouraging review! Many thanks for your kind words and good wishes.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a cute poem and well-written too. I love the artwork you attached to the writing. It is perfect for the subject of your poetry. I see this is a contest entrant so I wish you all the luck in the world.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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This is a cute poem and well-written too. I love the artwork you attached to the writing. It is perfect for the subject of your poetry. I see this is a contest entrant so I wish you all the luck in the world.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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This is such an encouraging review and I appoint a lot, along with your good wishes.
Comment from Michele Harber
What an adorable poem, told so perfectly from the child's point of view. Any child would enjoy and relate to this poem, and your use of different colors will make it even more enjoyable for children to read. The accompanying image couldn't be better.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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What an adorable poem, told so perfectly from the child's point of view. Any child would enjoy and relate to this poem, and your use of different colors will make it even more enjoyable for children to read. The accompanying image couldn't be better.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you for such a super review- so very encouraging!
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You?re very welcome.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great rhyming and a fun poem to read. A holiday is supposed to be a time to get away from it all, but this child doesn't want to leave anything behind. I like her idea - "Can I just stay at home instead?
It's not much fun without my toys ...
Take Billy's friend - and just have boys!"
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Great rhyming and a fun poem to read. A holiday is supposed to be a time to get away from it all, but this child doesn't want to leave anything behind. I like her idea - "Can I just stay at home instead?
It's not much fun without my toys ...
Take Billy's friend - and just have boys!"
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you Anne for your super review. I am glad you enjoyed it!
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You are very welcome.