Bruhaha
Practical Joke Creates Huge Panic On Beach7 total reviews
Comment from Judy Lawless
Seriously? This is a true story, Brett? It's very well written and captivating to read, but it's hard to imagine a brother going to so much trouble to prank his sister. An interesting family. lol
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Seriously? This is a true story, Brett? It's very well written and captivating to read, but it's hard to imagine a brother going to so much trouble to prank his sister. An interesting family. lol
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting about this dysfunctional family. Appreciate the review.
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You're quite welcome, Brett.
Comment from Susan Newell
Brett,
Very well written and engaging from start to finish. I would have liked to know that Archie was with the sister's before he suddenly appears. This is a heck of a practical joke. Is it really a true story?
Sue
Veronica glimpsed the beach blanket-wrapped corpse the crowd gawked at and wondered how the body got there? -- not a question
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Brett,
Very well written and engaging from start to finish. I would have liked to know that Archie was with the sister's before he suddenly appears. This is a heck of a practical joke. Is it really a true story?
Sue
Veronica glimpsed the beach blanket-wrapped corpse the crowd gawked at and wondered how the body got there? -- not a question
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, this is one of those true-to-life family stories that will never be forgotten, by those there, or us who are cursed with wanting more details. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Wow, this is one of those true-to-life family stories that will never be forgotten, by those there, or us who are cursed with wanting more details. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Once again, appreciate your review. Always generous.
Comment from SimianSavant
Ha, this is a solid and funny contest entry with lots of great detail that should give me a run for my money in the contest. Loved the "fat feet" reference. (I very nearly wrote about two 600-pound sisters having a weight gain challenge in this contest; oh well, maybe next time). Well done! Just a couple small things: check for typos in paragraph 3, and I suggest not having the text wrap around your picture at the top (you can adjust this in the "advanced" picture size settings at the bottom of the editor).
Best,
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Ha, this is a solid and funny contest entry with lots of great detail that should give me a run for my money in the contest. Loved the "fat feet" reference. (I very nearly wrote about two 600-pound sisters having a weight gain challenge in this contest; oh well, maybe next time). Well done! Just a couple small things: check for typos in paragraph 3, and I suggest not having the text wrap around your picture at the top (you can adjust this in the "advanced" picture size settings at the bottom of the editor).
Best,
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Appreciate the catch and the review.
Comment from Sankey
Well done. You had us all glued to the story, mate. Sorry I have not been around your stuff for such a long time. I also need to get back to some rambles and poems and stuff myself. No spags.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Well done. You had us all glued to the story, mate. Sorry I have not been around your stuff for such a long time. I also need to get back to some rambles and poems and stuff myself. No spags.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Appreciate your review. Struggling somewhat with dealing with this a test surgery, number five now. But, will get through it. Hopefully, all is well in your world these days.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great story. What a wonderful prank on poor Victoria. Although, an unforgettable one as well. I enjoyed the read. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, John C
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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This is a great story. What a wonderful prank on poor Victoria. Although, an unforgettable one as well. I enjoyed the read. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, John C
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Glad you enjoyed the story. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Excellent story for the prompt. Very humorous with a great twist at the end. I somehow imagine that Veronica must have attempted a revenge prank at some point in the future.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Excellent story for the prompt. Very humorous with a great twist at the end. I somehow imagine that Veronica must have attempted a revenge prank at some point in the future.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Appreciate the review. Glad you enjoyed the story.
