Verse and Story for 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "On This Day of Easter Blessing"poems, stories
6 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully written poem is deeply reverent yet celebratory of Easter and what it means, descriptive of salvation and how it was/is accomplished.
This is a very creative style.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Your skillfully written poem is deeply reverent yet celebratory of Easter and what it means, descriptive of salvation and how it was/is accomplished.
This is a very creative style.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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HI Janice Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You are truly blessed! Lord is in your favour, say, you are under God's control, I'm not even close to God, thank God, He does not act anything for man for God is God, and Lord is Lord, man is man, they never do anything like man; you are proud of posting this spiritual poetry, you had no time, you are perhaps busiest on this earth, you did not read your own post, now you check, your post you cannot read, what is the purpose you are serving by posting this, I cannot read, so I cannot underrate, I rate this work with five stars, I know how hard it is to get a low or poor rate, you deserve to get not more than single star, but I follow to err is human, to forgive is divine, I forgive you, I know, it is evident, you have written the work only for your own or self-satisfaction, self-pride, self-joy, self-entertainment, and not for the readers, it is just a show that you have written something but you do not want your poetry be read by at least one reader, sorry, I am short-sighted, and you have posted on a blackboard, words are printed in blackish red (not clear) so it is not readable, just now you please go and check, I am sure you cannot read your post, you post online, means you know it is no more private affair, it is public, and you cannot deceive public or the readers or your followers or the members of this site, let them read; you are happy your poetry is read by God and Lord only, if that is your purpose, you are successful, I am a fool, I try to let you know your errors, though it is punishable, but I cannot because I could not read a word; what you will do, just give me a thank letter and forget, because I forgive, God forgives and man does not care, so I am a mere man; god bless you; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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You are truly blessed! Lord is in your favour, say, you are under God's control, I'm not even close to God, thank God, He does not act anything for man for God is God, and Lord is Lord, man is man, they never do anything like man; you are proud of posting this spiritual poetry, you had no time, you are perhaps busiest on this earth, you did not read your own post, now you check, your post you cannot read, what is the purpose you are serving by posting this, I cannot read, so I cannot underrate, I rate this work with five stars, I know how hard it is to get a low or poor rate, you deserve to get not more than single star, but I follow to err is human, to forgive is divine, I forgive you, I know, it is evident, you have written the work only for your own or self-satisfaction, self-pride, self-joy, self-entertainment, and not for the readers, it is just a show that you have written something but you do not want your poetry be read by at least one reader, sorry, I am short-sighted, and you have posted on a blackboard, words are printed in blackish red (not clear) so it is not readable, just now you please go and check, I am sure you cannot read your post, you post online, means you know it is no more private affair, it is public, and you cannot deceive public or the readers or your followers or the members of this site, let them read; you are happy your poetry is read by God and Lord only, if that is your purpose, you are successful, I am a fool, I try to let you know your errors, though it is punishable, but I cannot because I could not read a word; what you will do, just give me a thank letter and forget, because I forgive, God forgives and man does not care, so I am a mere man; god bless you; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Dear Alcreator, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine poem about Easter and the religious celebration that is filled with sadness and also miracles, much enjoyed, I hope you have a Happy Easter, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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A fine poem about Easter and the religious celebration that is filled with sadness and also miracles, much enjoyed, I hope you have a Happy Easter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Hi Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from BeckyMann
Thank you for sharing. I always enjoy reading writings on topics I am unfamiliar with. The red font was a little bit difficult to read, but given the topic, it completely made sense. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you for sharing. I always enjoy reading writings on topics I am unfamiliar with. The red font was a little bit difficult to read, but given the topic, it completely made sense. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Dear Becky, thank you for your comments and review. I agree with you - font was a little difficult for me to read too, but I thought of the enormous difficulty and pain Christ went through - it also reminds me of His blood. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, On This Day of Easter Blessing, reminds the readers that God has provided the redemption from mankind's curse of mortality and damnation. ......................................................................................
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This poem, On This Day of Easter Blessing, reminds the readers that God has provided the redemption from mankind's curse of mortality and damnation. ......................................................................................
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Dear Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very beautiful and very well written spiritual poem you have penned about Easter blessings. You used very good words and very lovely imagery. I hope you have a wonderful Easter! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Donna, This is a very beautiful and very well written spiritual poem you have penned about Easter blessings. You used very good words and very lovely imagery. I hope you have a wonderful Easter! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Hi, Teri, thank you for your comments and review. Happy Easter to you too! Blessings, Donna
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you are so welcome sweet friend! love and blessings, Teri