You Do Matter
Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
What a lovely message in a very lovely poem! I can't think of more encouraging words to speak to another and it makes me wonder how many suicides wouldn't have happened, if only they had heard these words!!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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What a lovely message in a very lovely poem! I can't think of more encouraging words to speak to another and it makes me wonder how many suicides wouldn't have happened, if only they had heard these words!!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You have used your 34 syllables well with a good topic.
-A good message in the first verse about how a person matters
and should never think less of themselves.
-Very good closing with a positive message about being unique.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You have used your 34 syllables well with a good topic.
-A good message in the first verse about how a person matters
and should never think less of themselves.
-Very good closing with a positive message about being unique.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-four-syllable poem, You Do Matter, has the required syllable count and reminds the reader that he or she is important, is enough, and has a purpose in the world.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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This thirty-four-syllable poem, You Do Matter, has the required syllable count and reminds the reader that he or she is important, is enough, and has a purpose in the world.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you!
