Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Congratulations, Lisa!
This spectacular poem is stellar. It lifted my spirits.(I didn't review it before this, because I got first notice of it in the contest listing).
Have a wonderful week.

Best wishes,
Cindy
: )

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2022

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

This is a very nice poem. The poem flows well. Your message is clear. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. I also liked the rhyming. Nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022

Thanks for your warm response to this little piece.

reply by in777wr# on 15-Mar-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

I like this mono rhyme 2-6-2 poem.
Rainy days can be quite a damper on the spirits but behind the clouds...
the sunshine ready to cheer up the spirits. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022

Thanks for your nice comments! You're a little ray of sunshine.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 2-6-2 poem for the contest
with the nice addition of the many rhymes that read
smoothly. Most storms and trials will indeed pass.
Time is a healer.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022

Thanks for your nice comments, Robert.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is a beautiful and well-written poem. You are sending a wonderful message of encouragement to all who read this. The artwork is absolutely gorgeous. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022

Thank you so much for this lovely review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the positive message about
drying tears and sunshine calming fears.
-Sun does make a difference.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022

Thanks for your review. I've changed it a little bit but kept the meaning.

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Mar-2022

You are welcome. I like your changes. It sounds more positive that way.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I like your story in 10 syllables. I recently tried writing a poem in 25 syllables, and it wasn't easy. I admire anyone who can do this, and you've done a great job. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022

Thanks for your review. I've changed it a little bit but kept the meaning. Sometimes these brief writes take more time to do than longer ones.