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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Karaoke Anyone?"Adventures around & upon a hill
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Comment from jessizero
I like what I've read so far. I liked the dialogue. It captured and kept my interest. Thank you for sharing what you've written, and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I like what I've read so far. I liked the dialogue. It captured and kept my interest. Thank you for sharing what you've written, and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. If you want to read the previous chapters, feel free to visit my portfolio. There is no need to review them. Just enjoy them.
Comment from prettybluebirds
The only dowsing I ever heard of was to find water underground. I never heard it used for healing. This is rather interesting as I'm always interested in different healing techniques. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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The only dowsing I ever heard of was to find water underground. I never heard it used for healing. This is rather interesting as I'm always interested in different healing techniques. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. I may have already invited you: If you want to read the previous chapters, feel free to visit my portfolio. There is no need to review them. Just enjoy them.
Comment from Judy Lawless
First, let me say, Happy Birthday, Liz! Hope you're having a great day.
Second, I'm sorry for the delay in reviewing this. I got busy on Friday wading my way through the many messages I had, but my eyes would focus for only so long. Yesterday I was too tired to do any.
I liked this chapter. It was light and fun to read. I look forward to seeing how the karaoke goes.
Just one little typo: more of the meatball(s),
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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First, let me say, Happy Birthday, Liz! Hope you're having a great day.
Second, I'm sorry for the delay in reviewing this. I got busy on Friday wading my way through the many messages I had, but my eyes would focus for only so long. Yesterday I was too tired to do any.
I liked this chapter. It was light and fun to read. I look forward to seeing how the karaoke goes.
Just one little typo: more of the meatball(s),
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your lovely review. You hopefully know, there is no need for haste with me...I am so the opposite...a bit of a puddle compared with my friend Linda I wrote about in Traffick. She is like a rushing stream. I just want you to feel better...to well
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You're most welcome, Liz. Hugs.
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hugs back
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
So, the girls are going to have a little bit of fun. That is, if they can gather the courage to sing to a crowd. I do wonder why Cyndy has a sketchy feeling about the whole trip?
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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So, the girls are going to have a little bit of fun. That is, if they can gather the courage to sing to a crowd. I do wonder why Cyndy has a sketchy feeling about the whole trip?
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. In another couple of chapters we will all know.
Comment from aryr
Definitely a great continuation chapter, Liz. I always enjoy the adventures of Madeline and Cordelia who were joined at the Karaoke Bar by Karin and Cyndy. It was interesting that all four had similar side effects when they thought about playing our harps at the labyrinth. And why was Cyndy not singing? Very well done, greatly enjoyed.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Definitely a great continuation chapter, Liz. I always enjoy the adventures of Madeline and Cordelia who were joined at the Karaoke Bar by Karin and Cyndy. It was interesting that all four had similar side effects when they thought about playing our harps at the labyrinth. And why was Cyndy not singing? Very well done, greatly enjoyed.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your loyal review. There is more to come.
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Yayyy. You are so very welcome, Liz.
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***warm hug***
Comment from lyenochka
I like how Madeline knew from her people-watching skills which table was going to be freed up soon. It's these very simple everyday skills that really make a difference especially for detectives. I like that the twosome is connected with another congenial twosome who are equally spiritually sensitive.
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shaking her head to acknowledge (wouldn't one "nod" to acknowledge?)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I like how Madeline knew from her people-watching skills which table was going to be freed up soon. It's these very simple everyday skills that really make a difference especially for detectives. I like that the twosome is connected with another congenial twosome who are equally spiritually sensitive.
Comment:
shaking her head to acknowledge (wouldn't one "nod" to acknowledge?)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your loyal review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I guess 'nod' is a better image. A 'shaking' could mean a lot of things...lol
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I can imagine this was totally imaginary. I can think of nothing worse than making a fool of myself standing up performing in public, and as for persuading two friends to do likewise. No chance! Can't wait for the actual singing, though.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I can imagine this was totally imaginary. I can think of nothing worse than making a fool of myself standing up performing in public, and as for persuading two friends to do likewise. No chance! Can't wait for the actual singing, though.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. I used to do Karaoke weekly and everyone's favorite was What's Up by Four Non Blondes. They say, 'teachers are frustrated actors'. It was great fun. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6NXnxTNIWkc
Comment from Leann DS
This is the first chapter of the story that I have read, so I was a little lost, but I found the comments about the harps and dowsing interesting. Thank you so much for adding those notes. They were very helpful. Your writing is clean and strong with the dialogue and lots of description. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is the first chapter of the story that I have read, so I was a little lost, but I found the comments about the harps and dowsing interesting. Thank you so much for adding those notes. They were very helpful. Your writing is clean and strong with the dialogue and lots of description. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. You are welcome to go to my profile & read the previous chapters. No review is necessary. Just enjoy it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I haven't read any of the previous chapters, but Helen mentioned you so of course I had to check you out. She's right, this story is excellent. I'll have to read the others, those your character list tells me a lot so it was easy to jump in. I'm with Cordelia, I wouldn't want to be singing in front of a full house, either! Well done, I enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I haven't read any of the previous chapters, but Helen mentioned you so of course I had to check you out. She's right, this story is excellent. I'll have to read the others, those your character list tells me a lot so it was easy to jump in. I'm with Cordelia, I wouldn't want to be singing in front of a full house, either! Well done, I enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Sandra, Welcome. You are invited to read my previous chapters in my portfolio. There is no need for a review. Just enjoy it as you would bingeing reading a book.
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I'll do that, Liz! :)
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Great
