BJs
Kamala shoots up (a series): Episode X+13 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, I am surprised you got away with it. "Away with what?" one might ask. "Oh, you know that contest thing without vulgar words, sex, animals, or profanity!" "That story had none of those!" Good point.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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LOL, I am surprised you got away with it. "Away with what?" one might ask. "Oh, you know that contest thing without vulgar words, sex, animals, or profanity!" "That story had none of those!" Good point.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you Terry. Ah yes, all my writings are totally family appropriate one way or another. Either they are for family edification, or they are about potentially creating new family members. And (if I find the time to actually finish it in time for my contest) Battle of the Presidents, although it will be doing neither of those things, will be conducted on Disney property so I'm sure there will be a family-friendly version of it that comes out later, much like the Brothers Grimm stories. This story is going somewhere -- keep your bananas peeled for more!
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LOL, Love it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fantasy world of balloons turning into a mutual sexual connection filled with passion! My daughter performs magic with balloons every time it's someone's birthday, an unusual and fun post, love Dolly xx
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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A fantasy world of balloons turning into a mutual sexual connection filled with passion! My daughter performs magic with balloons every time it's someone's birthday, an unusual and fun post, love Dolly xx
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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That's a great talent to have! I always wished I could do balloon art but the idea of popping the balloons in the process terrified me. This is probably the most innocent episode in the series, haha. Stay tuned for the next episode! (Coming tonight, hopefully, if I finish it in time for Jan's family friendly contest). Thanks for the stars Dolly, and glad you enjoyed! -Harambe
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this writing prompt entry.
"Hello, may I help you sir?" (comma needed after 'you')
She turned to look at him, and sighed.
"It kind of blows, to be honest. The customers suck." (The space shouldn't be here. Move the second sentence next to 'sighed')
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading this writing prompt entry.
"Hello, may I help you sir?" (comma needed after 'you')
She turned to look at him, and sighed.
"It kind of blows, to be honest. The customers suck." (The space shouldn't be here. Move the second sentence next to 'sighed')
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Barbara, thank you for your timely catch of these glitches. I took the piece down actually because I realized after your message that I had missed the "spiritual" element of the requirement. But it is back up now, with that edit at the end, and your corrections. Much appreciated!