My Torment
The Prisoner contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the ordeal of a seemingly kidnapped schoolboy protagonist.
The work highlights his incarceration and confinement to a chair; his viciously being gagged; his suppressed tearful moments and reminiscences of his mother's last words, when the bus arrived to convey him to school.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the ordeal of a seemingly kidnapped schoolboy protagonist.
The work highlights his incarceration and confinement to a chair; his viciously being gagged; his suppressed tearful moments and reminiscences of his mother's last words, when the bus arrived to convey him to school.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Wow, thank you for the awesome review, Lloyd. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Thatguypk
Short, sweet and very amusing. Well done on coming up with such a clever interpretation of the writing prompt. :-) I remember my own school days experiences often feeling like I was in a prison with no escape. I thoroughly enjoyed this read.
PK
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Short, sweet and very amusing. Well done on coming up with such a clever interpretation of the writing prompt. :-) I remember my own school days experiences often feeling like I was in a prison with no escape. I thoroughly enjoyed this read.
PK
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Pk. I appreciate the stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness.