Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

That was a good entry for the contest, "Write a Lune". How a caterpillar metamorphoses into a beautiful flying creature. Well done, and please keep them coming. Nice to read your work.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

thank you esostine :)

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Perfect entry for the Write a Lune Contest and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The poem flowed well and didn't seem to be forced;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

thank you melodie :-)

reply by Melodie Michelle on 23-Jan-2022

;-)

Comment from jwsteele

Excellent

You've got it down. From here, you write great poems. Just deep enough to reveal the thought, feeling without out too much psychological baggage attached to drag the moment into the quagmire of monkey mind. Nice write.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

thank you jw :-)

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

nicely done Haiku about a very simple yet profound event -the birth of a butterfly from the lowly caterpillar, a true miracle of transformation that takes place every springtime.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

thank you jake :)

Comment from Louise Muller

Excellent

Even though poetry isn't my preferred genre, this is a great example of how writing can create a beautiful piece of art. Your piece is delicate, intriguing, and unique. Good job. This is what writing is all about.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

thank you louise :)

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Shelley, CONGRATULATIONS my sweet friend on
a well deserved win...

in a few short words...you turned a caterpillar...
into a beautiful butterfly...

very nicely written sweet girl...Ilove your poem...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

awww thank you so much linda :-)

reply by l.raven on 23-Jan-2022

your so welcome sweet girl...
smiling back at you...
love xxoo

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

It is amazing how nature can perform various ways of life. From under the microscope to the nature of beauty to the eyes. Well done with this short poem.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022

thank you ben:)

Comment from DeboraDyess

Excellent

Well, I can certainly see why you won this contest. You took 13 syllables and painted a picture! Perfect, peaceful, and a joy to read! Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
Deb

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022

thank you deb :-)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 5-3-5 lune for the contest
with excellent description of the transformation
of the caterpillar to butterfly.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022

thank you robert :-)

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

In a few short lines you've captured the complete metamorphosis of a caterpillar into a beautiful butterfly! It is an image that makes our hearts fly with it. Lovely.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022

cool! thank you june :)