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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Some wise and theist people do believe there are lives after death as soul is indestructible, only body goes after one's death; you have lost your darling son and dear wife; you do believe in their lives, you only feel and experience their existence somewhere; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D.R.)

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Thanks ALCREATOR.
    They uses to ingest some of their dead go to basically, the same reason.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the ever widening vacuum one has to go through in recapitulating the past.

The work highlights a stuttering beginning that is enmeshed with the gory happenings in the life of the protagonist; the clouding up with tears; getting ennobled with miracles; the shooting star experience; all culminating in rejuvenating the deadness back to life.

The work earns its texture through the effective use of hopelessness and its dialectical negation of living a hopeful life as contending motifs for stemming the evil tide.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Thanks Lloyd.
    As this year ends here at Fanstory.
    I shall remember not only my hundreds of posts.
    But also, those whom I reviewed.
    Doctor Ricky
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reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 01-Jan-2022
    Remain Blessed.
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 01-Jan-2022
    Remain Blessed.