Reminisce
Coming Home3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
So nice when the holidays bring friends to our door...or back in our active memory, where we can muse on the good times once again! One quick edit in line seven I think?
"your" should be "you're."
Happy New Year!
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
So nice when the holidays bring friends to our door...or back in our active memory, where we can muse on the good times once again! One quick edit in line seven I think?
"your" should be "you're."
Happy New Year!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Thank you k. That needs fixing. Happy New Year to you and your family my friend.
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Easy edit. I'm the queen of typos et al!
K
Comment from jaded831
Your poem made me smile, it had a rhythm to it and rhyme, I was a bit confused as to who the missing friend was, then I realized that may have been intentional. The meeting may be a dream. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
Your poem made me smile, it had a rhythm to it and rhyme, I was a bit confused as to who the missing friend was, then I realized that may have been intentional. The meeting may be a dream. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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No, it was a friend that came back and became more than friends. But sometimes love come true has a dreamy quality
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Thanks.
Comment from sajeda6
I really enjoyed the poem, its got nice rhyme to it.
Its nice to remember the past, lovely memories. The picture goes nicely with the poem. Its always nice to have old friends or family back to visit or stay.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
I really enjoyed the poem, its got nice rhyme to it.
Its nice to remember the past, lovely memories. The picture goes nicely with the poem. Its always nice to have old friends or family back to visit or stay.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Thank you sajeda6; glad you liked it.