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Heart Crafted Poems -2021

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Musings of an old man -2021

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Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Congratulations on this poem being recognized. A great faith poem for the faith poetry contest. It's a forceful and straightforward proclamation of your faith and belief.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
    I am so grateful, thank you for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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He Died, so that I might Live
Son Of God
by JLR


Excellent entry for the My Faith Poetry contest. It's a good sample for this challenge. Jesus sacrificed his life for us in the name of love.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
    Gypsy, I appreciate your kind words of validation. 🎼🎼🎶🙏🙏
Comment from Malerie
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"I see the magnificence of your Glory not the sacrifice, but of the death that you did cheat." Wow, that is my favorite line. Yes, He cheated death so that we could live. Very moving spiritual poem, reads well and has a nice flow. I also like the artwork you selected of "the son." Very well done.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
    Malerie, 🙏 I appreciate your sharing your thoughts. 👍👍👍🎶🎼
Comment from Wendy G
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That is indeed a beautiful poem of faith, centred on the Cross, and the sacrificial atoning work of the Lord Jesus. And yes, now that we have His Spirit within, our spirit soars. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
    Wendy, thank you for your validation of this poems message. 🙏🎶🎶
Comment from ahamranji
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"My mind-thoughts
ever swelling
while my soul soars,
as I scribe here".

Lovely lines. Such a beautiful poem. Loved it. Best wishes and regards. God bless.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Thank you 🙏 I hope you are well!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very nice and very well written Faith poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and very true words that said so much about our Lord. He died so that I might live is so true. Great imagery. Best wishes in the contest.
Check out this one thing:
the impact of Christ's dystiny and
destiny
Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Teri, oh silly me, thanks for the catch on the notes 🙏🙏🎶🎶🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼
Comment from jaded831
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Your poem speaks to my soul. It made me think of all I have because God sent His son. I keep the faith and pray everyday to bless those who have little. I do feel all the pain that exists is generated by mankind. God bless you.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Thank ypu very much! Sending prayers for the Highest and Best of all God has planned for this Christmas and throughout all of 2022!
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
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Yes, the Son of God did cheat death so that we will never suffer. Sublime use of words to convey the most important message to all believers. Thank you so much for sharing this great poem and wishing you all the very best in 'My Faith Poetry' contest, Kit.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Kit, thank you fro this fine review.🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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Your faith comes through your words that touch the heart. When you focus on being a blessing, God makes sure that you are always blessed in abundance.I loved your spiritual poem. Good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Seshardi thank you so very much! 🙏🙏
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your faith shines through in your free-write and your beliefs are comforting to you. I enjoyed your interpretation of the Biblical events here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Thank you Dolly, Merry Christmas 🎶🎶🙏🙏
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 10-Dec-2021
    Merry Christmas to you too x x x