Waterways
2-5-2 entry9 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
It's amazing when you realize the little rivers you fish in or swim go on connecting over and over until they all come to meet in the sea. Good job!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
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It's amazing when you realize the little rivers you fish in or swim go on connecting over and over until they all come to meet in the sea. Good job!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Water always finds a way of spreading and sharing and your words say it all here as rivers and sea join in harmony, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Water always finds a way of spreading and sharing and your words say it all here as rivers and sea join in harmony, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Your poem perfectly describes the picture and is very well thought out as you had so few words to work with. Best of luck in the contest. You have done very well.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Your poem perfectly describes the picture and is very well thought out as you had so few words to work with. Best of luck in the contest. You have done very well.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Your poem perfectly describes the picture and is very well thought out as you had so few words to work with. Best of luck in the contest. You have done very well.
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Your poem perfectly describes the picture and is very well thought out as you had so few words to work with. Best of luck in the contest. You have done very well.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Poetry, 2-5-2 writing prompt entry, speaks truly, naturally, clearly and concisely rivers meet up at the sea as one; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, keep posting, I, DR, love reviews; ALCREATOR
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This General Poetry, 2-5-2 writing prompt entry, speaks truly, naturally, clearly and concisely rivers meet up at the sea as one; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, keep posting, I, DR, love reviews; ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
Comment from Terry Broxson
A very nice entry for the contest, good luck. Rivers do meet up at seas and oceans as one, but I have never thought of it that way. What an interesting way you have a looking at things. Good job.
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A very nice entry for the contest, good luck. Rivers do meet up at seas and oceans as one, but I have never thought of it that way. What an interesting way you have a looking at things. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
Comment from jaded831
Very interesting and well written. I like your theme, rivers and streams meeting to form one big lake. I am a bit bias because I love waterways. The picture you chose adds to your words. Together they make the perfect combination.
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Very interesting and well written. I like your theme, rivers and streams meeting to form one big lake. I am a bit bias because I love waterways. The picture you chose adds to your words. Together they make the perfect combination.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
Comment from Sylla
Great imagery, and in nine very short syllables told a story about one of the oldest geographical and geological feats water makes to the ocean. Good job!
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Great imagery, and in nine very short syllables told a story about one of the oldest geographical and geological feats water makes to the ocean. Good job!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
Comment from Modee
A very nice picture to go with your poetry. So many rivers flow and meet up to become one river - or dump into a lake or other body of water. Cool feelings for my morning reading. :)
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A very nice picture to go with your poetry. So many rivers flow and meet up to become one river - or dump into a lake or other body of water. Cool feelings for my morning reading. :)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021