Comment from jbrax wilkn

Excellent

Clever message well done, and you made me want to reply in kind. So I did just that. My reply is titled "angry clown". Never heard of this type of poetry before this site. More difficult than it sounds. Hope you do/did well in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021

Thanks, jb

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Great entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count

Good syllables count and connection between lines for a better flow.

The rhymes don't seem forced.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021

Thank you, GBR

Comment from SimianSavant

Excellent

Clever. Not just the way you broke the compound words, but also the way you perfectly match the color of your background to Trump's hat. An excellent contest entry!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021

Thank you, Harambe, for the kind review.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

I like your poem it meets the criteria. I don't like the theme, because Trump puts money before people. So I question what will make America great again. I do not believe Trump. We all have the right to our opinions. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021

Thank you, jaded.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I am not sure if you are praising or ridiculing this man, but you have hit the nail on the head that he certainly has a most specific 'brand'. Personally, I have grown to mistrust over-packaging, self-promotion, and advertising hype. Your poem fits the contest prompt well, and I thought you connected the lines effectively to make it stand out against other more disjointed offerings in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021

Thank you, Lisa, for the great review.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

Great rhyming, including internal rhyming. I love your word play. I don't thinkI've recognized anything this clever done with words in this order. Very cool. I usually like to play with words like this. It is right there. I hope others got to enjoy it. There's probably more literary techniques, but this is enough.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021

Thank you, LIz.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Well, this writing is certainly in sync with the portrait. How often did we see that exact expression throughout his term? There is not much one can say about these short poems except good work. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021

Thank you, PBB

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with the four/five rhymes and the political theme.
Many would rather just forget about all that stuff.
Excellent word usage.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021

Thanks, Robert. I actually found the picture after finishing the poem. It fit for me.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I will ignore the picture as I comment on your short poem. I am impressed with how you were able to use FOUR rhymes in your poem in a natural manner. The poem flows smoothly from line to line.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021

Thank you, Rod. Was there a picture? : )

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This General Poetry, 1-6-1 writing prompt entry, speaks band stand of former US President Trump on his election campaign MAGA; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, write more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021

Thanks, ALD