It's Hard To Let Them Go
We want to spend one more day with them.2 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
The loss of a loved one is such a hard thing to bear, and your poem shows just why. I like the way you create the idyllic scene of some future reunion in heaven. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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The loss of a loved one is such a hard thing to bear, and your poem shows just why. I like the way you create the idyllic scene of some future reunion in heaven. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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Thanks very much!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a good spiritual peom. I was amazed they you kept the same amount of syllables in each of these long lines. Yes, we would love to spend my time with loved one that have gone. I'd like to choose a day when they were feeling at their best so they could enjoy it to rather than one of their final days when they might be suffering.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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This is a good spiritual peom. I was amazed they you kept the same amount of syllables in each of these long lines. Yes, we would love to spend my time with loved one that have gone. I'd like to choose a day when they were feeling at their best so they could enjoy it to rather than one of their final days when they might be suffering.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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Thanks very much