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Dawn's new light -

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31 total reviews 
Comment from pome lover
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Roy,
Congratulations on All Time Best and Poem of the Month! What a well deserved accolade.
This is indeed a "deep thing of the heart" - sweet and very meaningful - love and faithfulness.
A lovely poem.
Katharine

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
    Thanks Katharine, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by pome lover on 04-Nov-2021
    and blessings to you, too.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Exceptional
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This is a truly beautiful birthday poem, and I bet Elaine had a tear reading this.
I can give you true love's vow
that's all she wants I'm sure. I hope Elaine enjoyed her special day.
Cheers to you both
Valda

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    Thanks again Valda, for these fantastic comments and excellent comments, Roy
Comment from scongrove
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Very heartfelt and beautiful my friend :)
Happy birthday to your beloved Elaine. I hope her day was filled with love and happiness.
This is such a wonderful gift you did for her. Words like yours are every woman's dreams to hear. And what makes this so special, you didn't purchase the words like a card. You created them yourself straight from your heart.
Thanks for sharing with us!

Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    I?m grateful to you Shana for being a terrific supporter,
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'Dawn's new light-', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    Thanks so much Duchess, for these great comments and a lovely comments, Roy
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 03-Nov-2021
    Roy as always you're very welcome.
    Bless you,
    the Duchess
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    Bless you
    Duchess
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 03-Nov-2021

    Bless you too Roy,
    the Duchess
Comment from Sally Law
Exceptional
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This is exquisite poetry and aptly illustrated, dear Roy. Your wife is abundantly blessed as are you. Sending you both my very best and birthday blessings for Elaine.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    Thanks Sally, for these fantastic comments and comments, Roy
Comment from Judy Lawless
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Roy, this is such a beautiful poem to your wife on her birthday, it brought a tear to my eyes. No other gift could be so precious. I'm sure she had a happy birthday with you by her side.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    Thanks Judy, for these fantastic comments and comments, Roy
Comment from Ben Colder
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Happy Birthday to Elaine. I wish God's blessings on her and your household. I feel blessed to be part of your life here on Fan Story. May our King continue blessing you.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Dawn Munro
Exceptional
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Ah, Sir Roy, how lovely! Your damsel will surely treasure this most romantic and very beautiful gift. Your poem is exceptional, in my humble opinion, and surely one any woman would welcome.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Dawn, for these marvellous comments and a great review, and amazing stars, blessings Roy
reply by Dawn Munro on 13-Nov-2021
    Blessings, Roy -- I'm sorry I am so late responding!!!
reply by Dawn Munro on 13-Nov-2021
    Blessings, Roy -- I'm sorry I am so late responding!!!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
    Never apologise, it?s fine.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Stunningly beautiful and an endearing love poem as a celebration of Elaine's birthday and of your love and devotion to her.
Happy Birthday to Elaine!
Blessings
Mary



 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Mary. for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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This is a poem of love. You have expressed your true love which cannot be measure by wealth...

You give her love songs, a pledge and promise to be with her at all times. This is more valuable than a diamond ring...

Love your poem.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy