Poor little horse
He is suffering10 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a very cute entry for the punny contest! The poor little horse has a sore throat and his voice is hoarse. I love the picture of the little horse too. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
This is a very cute entry for the punny contest! The poor little horse has a sore throat and his voice is hoarse. I love the picture of the little horse too. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Mama Baer
Love this fun and witty play on words! ...a little hoarse! So clever. I often wanted to own a pet horse. They are such majestic animals, I think. I hope your "little hoarse" feels better soon! Thanks for the fun.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
Love this fun and witty play on words! ...a little hoarse! So clever. I often wanted to own a pet horse. They are such majestic animals, I think. I hope your "little hoarse" feels better soon! Thanks for the fun.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from karenina
A lot of cute entries... This one just called out to me! I DO read every entry. I REVIEW the one I intend to vote for! (hint.)
Dear anonymous? I hope I'm back to congratulate you on your win!
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Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
A lot of cute entries... This one just called out to me! I DO read every entry. I REVIEW the one I intend to vote for! (hint.)
Dear anonymous? I hope I'm back to congratulate you on your win!
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Karenina
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and vote.
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You betchya!
Karenina
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I enjoyed this 5-7-5 write. It made me smile.
It is a lighthearted and amusing read. I especially
enjoyed the play on words - hoarse. Right up my alley.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
I enjoyed this 5-7-5 write. It made me smile.
It is a lighthearted and amusing read. I especially
enjoyed the play on words - hoarse. Right up my alley.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from Wendy G
This is a very clever and witty entry for the Animal 5-7-5. I do like the play on words for horse/hoarse. You've chosen a great photo. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
This is a very clever and witty entry for the Animal 5-7-5. I do like the play on words for horse/hoarse. You've chosen a great photo. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the great review. Much appreciated
Comment from LisaMay
I hope you get well soon and grow up to be a big horse. Have you been tested for Covid? You will need some very long strings on your mask to get over your ears if you go out in public. It's lucky you can write, thus saving your sore throat.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
I hope you get well soon and grow up to be a big horse. Have you been tested for Covid? You will need some very long strings on your mask to get over your ears if you go out in public. It's lucky you can write, thus saving your sore throat.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Many thanks.
Comment from Mary Shifman
Ah, this is a very cute and clever poem. This little one even looks as it might have a sore throat. I had a pony like this once and he was so smart. This picture looks just like him. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
Ah, this is a very cute and clever poem. This little one even looks as it might have a sore throat. I had a pony like this once and he was so smart. This picture looks just like him. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks Mary
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You are welcome.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Okay I love this this was very good very well written the picture was on point it was really captivating thank you for sharing this indeed keep up the good work
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
Okay I love this this was very good very well written the picture was on point it was really captivating thank you for sharing this indeed keep up the good work
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks
Comment from Sally Law
I'm so sorry, little bit horse. I wish I could send you some horse treats. A sweet one for the contest, mystery poet. I wish you all the best with this. Blessings,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
I'm so sorry, little bit horse. I wish I could send you some horse treats. A sweet one for the contest, mystery poet. I wish you all the best with this. Blessings,
Sally :))
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks Sally