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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from pookietoo
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This is great. Keep up the great work writing your poems. I enjoy reading them. Take care. Enjoy life, and smile. Enjoy the little things that matter most.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
    I thank you my dear pookietoo!
    Yes for stopping by again!
    I always look forward to entertaining and writing is just one of my venues.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by pookietoo on 03-Oct-2021
    Welcome
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
Comment from Mary Shifman
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Oh my goodness, I got goose-bumps reading this. It is a scary but wonderful story. Thank heavens you followed your instincts. It is nothing short of a miracle. Have you thought of putting this splendid poem in a birthday card for your precious daughter? I'm sure she'd love it. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Yeah it was a real thriller and not Manila.
    But everything worked out for the better and thank you for your kind thoughts and review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Mary Shifman on 01-Oct-2021
    You welcome,
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Dr. Ricky. This is a beautiful story of your daughter's birth. It must be tough to sense such things and nobody is doing anything about it. I felt your anguish and was happy with the final outcome. Well done you! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    I thank you very much Miss kiwi for your consulting review have a beautiful and blessed weekend!
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
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Happy Birthday dear Dana! I can relate to this when I had my daughter. It is amazing how the medical profession is so laxadaisy and son unconcerned when it comes to saving ones life.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Once again country ranch writer for your thoughts and reviews.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by country ranch writer on 01-Oct-2021
    🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎
reply by country ranch writer on 01-Oct-2021
    🌴🌴🌴☘️☘️☘️
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
reply by country ranch writer on 04-Oct-2021
    Smiles🐊
reply by country ranch writer on 04-Oct-2021
    Smiles🐊
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This story brought tears to my eyes, because I know that when you know, you KNOW. You brought to my mind a similar experience, but my baby only lived two hours after frantic forced delivery. The nurse wouldn't listen.

Your poem is creatively and beautifully written, filled with a dad's emotional and heartwarming detail. I too say, Happy Birthday to your daughter, God's gift to you.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    I can tell you this that I lost my 18-year-old son in a car accident on March 31st 2003.
    Jason had some kind of a premonition
    And, as a result of that he told Dana.
    (The one who was born with the cord wrapped around her neck.
    To ride in the car with her older sister Kyle.
    Or else I would have lost two children that day.
    All I can tell you is what you've heard already that your child is waiting for you in a better place.
    And thanks for your review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Eternal Muse
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It was miraculous and amazing that your daughter was saved. God was watching for her and I want to say a prayer of thanks.

She is so beautiful in her baby picture, such an angel. And now she is 35.

I really enjoyed your hope, it professes hope and the light of God.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Why thank you so much and I will actually show her this later!
    Ricky