Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 56"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
I'm glad those hoodlums clocked Mason with the skillet! Meanwhile, Cassidy may have a shot at finding Annie, through Sofia.
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Tell her I'll talk to you and the Sherrif about leniency."
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Tell her I'll talk to you and the Sheriff about leniency."
It is his suspect, so if he says okay, then it's a go."
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She is his suspect, so if he says okay, then it's a go."
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How much more does poor Annie have to go through, before the police and FBI find her? I hope it will be soon. Oh, but then your story may be over...
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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I'm glad those hoodlums clocked Mason with the skillet! Meanwhile, Cassidy may have a shot at finding Annie, through Sofia.
Here are some suggested revisions:
Tell her I'll talk to you and the Sherrif about leniency."
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Tell her I'll talk to you and the Sheriff about leniency."
It is his suspect, so if he says okay, then it's a go."
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She is his suspect, so if he says okay, then it's a go."
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How much more does poor Annie have to go through, before the police and FBI find her? I hope it will be soon. Oh, but then your story may be over...
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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My apologies for the short reply. I thank you and appreciate your continued support all the time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
So, Cassidy is willing to reveal that she is still alive, in order to find Annie.
If Sofia will eventually speak, it seems this would be a viable approach.
There is a lot happening that is mysterious regarding Mason. Why is he at his cabin? What a goof-up that these two did not recognize their boss.
Ralf
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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So, Cassidy is willing to reveal that she is still alive, in order to find Annie.
If Sofia will eventually speak, it seems this would be a viable approach.
There is a lot happening that is mysterious regarding Mason. Why is he at his cabin? What a goof-up that these two did not recognize their boss.
Ralf
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all lI can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
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Not to worry. I understand.
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Not to worry. I understand.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
it looks like the pace has slowed down. The characters must be trying to catch their breath and plan their next moves. With that knock on his head, I hope Mason hasn't got a split head. Maybe a split headache! Hope to see more action in the next chapter. Cheers!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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it looks like the pace has slowed down. The characters must be trying to catch their breath and plan their next moves. With that knock on his head, I hope Mason hasn't got a split head. Maybe a split headache! Hope to see more action in the next chapter. Cheers!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Seshadri....Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
It's good that Cassidy will go and try to talk with Sofia. But I wonder if Sofia knows that Cassidy was supposedly dead? Will she think she saw a ghost?
Glad that Mason got clobbered by his own goons!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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It's good that Cassidy will go and try to talk with Sofia. But I wonder if Sofia knows that Cassidy was supposedly dead? Will she think she saw a ghost?
Glad that Mason got clobbered by his own goons!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all I can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Well! Mason will certainly have a headache for a while if not a skull fracture!
Hoping that Sofia will realise the game is up - or feel some mercy for Annie. Another well told chapter. Hope the next one will be out soon!!
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Well! Mason will certainly have a headache for a while if not a skull fracture!
Hoping that Sofia will realise the game is up - or feel some mercy for Annie. Another well told chapter. Hope the next one will be out soon!!
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all I can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from lancellot
This is a well written chapter. But after the crescendo before, things seem to be slowing. That Miguel thinks something in the cabin brought Mason there is a bit odd. But I guess, there must be something, for Mason to just walk in, without a care, knowing the two men were there.
No helicopter searching the area the Land rover went missing. No roadblocks. Are These FBI off the books?
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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This is a well written chapter. But after the crescendo before, things seem to be slowing. That Miguel thinks something in the cabin brought Mason there is a bit odd. But I guess, there must be something, for Mason to just walk in, without a care, knowing the two men were there.
No helicopter searching the area the Land rover went missing. No roadblocks. Are These FBI off the books?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all I can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've been threatened with a couple of them old cast-iron frying pans. But the idea didn't sound good enough for me to stick around and see what they felt like.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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I've been threatened with a couple of them old cast-iron frying pans. But the idea didn't sound good enough for me to stick around and see what they felt like.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all I can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
Ist it funny? That Tito would hit the very person who could possibly get he and Miguel out of there. And meanwhile, although they've captured Sofia, she is feigning a lack of understating and claiming not to speak a word of English, which is ridiculous. But Cassidy says she will get her to talk. Well done Carol, another great episode, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Ist it funny? That Tito would hit the very person who could possibly get he and Miguel out of there. And meanwhile, although they've captured Sofia, she is feigning a lack of understating and claiming not to speak a word of English, which is ridiculous. But Cassidy says she will get her to talk. Well done Carol, another great episode, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all I can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
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Don?t apologise that?s fine Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hey, I'm not in bed!!! Lol. I think I got the names muddled in my last review, (tiredness) Miguel isn't dead and Sofia won't open up because she thinks he is!! Sorry, no wonder you made sure I was wide awake today, LOL.
I think it might just work when Sofia sees Cassidy. She'll be worried sick Cassidy will do or say something to put her in prison for purgery. I laughed out loud when they hit Mason on the head with that heavy pan, it would have killed someone less thick headed! I hope we're there when he comes round, that'll be a fun conversation. He was probably there to kill Miguel, does Mason know he has Anne? Another wonderful chapter, my friend. Well done!! Love and hugs. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hey, I'm not in bed!!! Lol. I think I got the names muddled in my last review, (tiredness) Miguel isn't dead and Sofia won't open up because she thinks he is!! Sorry, no wonder you made sure I was wide awake today, LOL.
I think it might just work when Sofia sees Cassidy. She'll be worried sick Cassidy will do or say something to put her in prison for purgery. I laughed out loud when they hit Mason on the head with that heavy pan, it would have killed someone less thick headed! I hope we're there when he comes round, that'll be a fun conversation. He was probably there to kill Miguel, does Mason know he has Anne? Another wonderful chapter, my friend. Well done!! Love and hugs. Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hurrah! I thought about Mason's head and him dying, but no one has mentioned it yet...I think, like you, they are too happy to see him get what he deserves.
Mason thinks Annie was left in the basement so he doesn't know if she is dead or alive. He knows Sofia didn't make it with the papers and the money...so I've not thought it completely out but something besides money needs to be hidden in the cabin (something big) maybe a gun with his fingerprints that links him to a murder????? and lots of money or a fake passport since his is in the hands of the FEDS. Any ideas? I think Miguel needs to find it before Mason though. Open to suggestions?
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
You still have lots of suspense to keep bringing us back, Carol. Still worrying about Annie, of course and now Cassidy will be exposing herself. Great writing!
"Garth's furrowed brow(ed)..."
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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You still have lots of suspense to keep bringing us back, Carol. Still worrying about Annie, of course and now Cassidy will be exposing herself. Great writing!
"Garth's furrowed brow(ed)..."
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all I can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
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Hugs, Carol. No need to explain.