Desolate Plains
a 3-5-3 poetic form8 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
Wow, this is gorgeous. I'm a lover of winter and this scene grabs me. It's one I would put on my wall. The poem is lovely and I'm sure, very true since there's no, or at least not many, trees to break the wind. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Wow, this is gorgeous. I'm a lover of winter and this scene grabs me. It's one I would put on my wall. The poem is lovely and I'm sure, very true since there's no, or at least not many, trees to break the wind. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much Mary!!
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You are welcome.
Comment from l.raven
there are days I would love to be in that cabin...
cozied up on the couch...reading the perfect book...
and drinking so hot coco...sigh...
I love your poem...very nicely written...
and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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there are days I would love to be in that cabin...
cozied up on the couch...reading the perfect book...
and drinking so hot coco...sigh...
I love your poem...very nicely written...
and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thank you, sweet Linda, I soooo appreciate your lovely comments!!
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your so very welcome...love xxoo
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Thank you, sweet Linda, I soooo appreciate your lovely comments!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This nature 3-5-3, Desolate Plains, has the proper formatting and takes the readers to the truly remote and unforgiving plains .
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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This nature 3-5-3, Desolate Plains, has the proper formatting and takes the readers to the truly remote and unforgiving plains .
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much, Bill!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery that
describes the winter scene.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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-Good artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery that
describes the winter scene.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much, Pam!
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
Your photo/poem combo convince me I don't want to be out on the plains in the winter. An excellent selection of words to set the scene and create mood: DESOLATE, WILD, MOANING. Rod
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Your photo/poem combo convince me I don't want to be out on the plains in the winter. An excellent selection of words to set the scene and create mood: DESOLATE, WILD, MOANING. Rod
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much, Rod!
Comment from pookietoo
Great job! I really enjoyed reading this Good luck in the contest. Keep smiling. Keep up the great work writing your poems. Best wishes always. :)
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Great job! I really enjoyed reading this Good luck in the contest. Keep smiling. Keep up the great work writing your poems. Best wishes always. :)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Hello. Thanks so much!
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You are welcome.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A succinct use of language. The words themselves sound cold. The flow is good and the guidelines are met. The picture adds to the feel of the poem.
A good read. Good presentation. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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A succinct use of language. The words themselves sound cold. The flow is good and the guidelines are met. The picture adds to the feel of the poem.
A good read. Good presentation. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much!
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You are welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem and that desolate photo made me shiver - I could feel the chill you described so well. 'Birth' and 'moaning' personalise the poem very effectively.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Your poem and that desolate photo made me shiver - I could feel the chill you described so well. 'Birth' and 'moaning' personalise the poem very effectively.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much, Lisa!
