Comment from
Frank Jauregui
Wow, this is the second of your poems that I've read back to back. I like this one best because it comes across as coming from a point of healing and acceptance that wasn't missing from the last one but the picture is made more complete by including your youth and more intimate details of how you met your wife and other details about how your son came to be. God bless you and keep writing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
Thanks Frank.
I had a good time writing this one.
And, it's always good to share.
And, if you know how to do it right?
Well it can be impressive.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from
mermaids
This is definitely one of your best poems. Your poetic form well describes a life journey. I like how your poem ends on a positive note despite the losses and struggles you had
Many can relate to your words
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
Why thank you Elaine I thought when I was creating this it flowed quickly into my mind and Rhymed very beautifully myself!
They say practice makes perfect?
Thanks for sharing!
Have a blessed week!
Doctor Ricky 1024